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Don't Put Your Faith in Apples

The always trying Tyburn form

5 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This tyburn, Don't Put Your Faith in Apples, is set up properly and suggests that rather than keeping the doctor away by apple ingestion, see the doctor and give her the apple.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    Clever observation, Bill, but, as she undoubtedly would be familiar with the "keeps the doctor away" adage, mightn't she misinterpret the gesture as a subtle message that the patient intends to stop seeing her?

    Thanks for the excellent review!

    Don
reply by Bill Schott on 08-Oct-2017
    Maybe she'll accept it as payment. (in a fairy tale)
Comment from BeasPeas
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LOL! You're right. The Tyburn is a "trying" form. An apple a day keeps the doctor away, but there's nothing like a good doctor when we need one. Much luck in the contest with this fun entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Marilyn. as always, much appreciated. I'll bet you didn't know this blind entry was mine, didja?
    Don
reply by BeasPeas on 07-Oct-2017
    I found out when I read the results of the contest and wrote congrats on your wall.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
    But you said, "Much luck in the contest..." ??
reply by BeasPeas on 08-Oct-2017
    Hi Don. Then I guess I didn't know when I first reviewed it that it was yours. However, I did write a congrats on your wall when you won. Marilyn
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Read it twice and realized you used a lady doc, then read the authors notes...duh.
Cute, but I always say if they don't make it as doctors, they can be spies who force information.lol

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
    Huh? Come again?
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting tyburn poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the picture of the apple. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Thank you for complimenting my tyburn poem, Teri. I always find it a troublesome form, so your review is especially reassuring.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi;
it looks like Tyburn poems are taking over the board today. Yours is another entertaining one - well written, and perfectly formatted. I enjoyed reading and I wish you well in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your excellent review, Patty. Much appreciated.