This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Emergency Meeting"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from royowen
What a terrible thing to happen, hubby's brother having a heart attack, I've prayed. The.people behind the incredible time shifts of Veronica. And probably caused Veronica to nuzzle the neck of Joe, instead of Michael. My little granddaughter has an imaginary Friend called Phyllis, her father's whose name was Jamie, and visit my elder daughter in New York, strange but true. Well done, Sandra, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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What a terrible thing to happen, hubby's brother having a heart attack, I've prayed. The.people behind the incredible time shifts of Veronica. And probably caused Veronica to nuzzle the neck of Joe, instead of Michael. My little granddaughter has an imaginary Friend called Phyllis, her father's whose name was Jamie, and visit my elder daughter in New York, strange but true. Well done, Sandra, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much, my dear friend. It was his second heart attack so we were very worried. I just hope he listens to his doctor now and realises he is no spring chicken anymore. :)) Thank you, also, for another lovely review, Roy, I really appreciate you, and your support. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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Always welcome, hope he's OK
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH wow I love the ending of this one and what a wonderful way to get her in the past to face what she has to face. I laughed after reading the piece again. Nicley done
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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OH wow I love the ending of this one and what a wonderful way to get her in the past to face what she has to face. I laughed after reading the piece again. Nicley done
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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LOL, I'm so glad you liked that, Barb. Thank you so much. Sorry, I've not been reviewing you lately, I've just come home from Spain, but will be looking you up now. :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from l.raven
OMG Sandra, you scared me into ten more years of my life...but they are back in the past...now find Daveth...and let Mildred and James know some how...sigh...I've never had an invisible friend as a child...but it's never to late... I'm working on a boyfriend as I write...your never to old to be creative...just not sure what to call him...LOL...this is a great chapter sweet angel...and very well written...loveeeeee you so...Linda xxoo....
so glad all is well with Grahams brother...sigh...and hope all is still doing well with Ian and Sarah...say hi for to Ian...and you take care as well...xxoo love
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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OMG Sandra, you scared me into ten more years of my life...but they are back in the past...now find Daveth...and let Mildred and James know some how...sigh...I've never had an invisible friend as a child...but it's never to late... I'm working on a boyfriend as I write...your never to old to be creative...just not sure what to call him...LOL...this is a great chapter sweet angel...and very well written...loveeeeee you so...Linda xxoo....
so glad all is well with Grahams brother...sigh...and hope all is still doing well with Ian and Sarah...say hi for to Ian...and you take care as well...xxoo love
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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LOL!! Linda, you are so funny! Bless your heart, thank you so much for the 6 stars and this really fun review. So, who is this new boyfriend you are going to write about with no name? LOL, Love that! Love you too, my friend. You are my breath of fresh air. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra. xxxx
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LOL...oh I'm not going to write about him...maybe...I was just writing when I was thinking about him ...I'm not even sure how to start creating my invisible boyfriend...only he better stay on his side of the bed...just when sleeping...LOL...still working on a name...LOL...you are so welcome you beautiful lady...love you muchly....biggerest hugs..and smiling back at ya...love you so...and say hi to Ian for me...xxoo
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You are so funny, I'd think up a romantic name for the times he's 'not asleep!' LOL. xxxxxx
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Deary Do...Mr.Romeo Clear...I know one thing...I'll be able to see right through this guy...get it???...LOL...he won't get anything by me...I know two things...I'll have to be on my toes...or I'll never see IT coming...LOL...or anything else...xxoo love xxoo
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LOL!!!!!! Linda, you crack me up sometimes! I'm like Mildred, I'll be wetting my knickers laughing soon! Love you too you mad woman!!! LOL xx
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I wonder if Joe would be looking for a new host anytime soon...hummmmm...xxoo love ya
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I'll write you in for when he goes hopping about next time! He is rather dishy, as you will learn next time!! LOL. xxxx
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I'll shower and make sure my hair is washed...put on some sexy PJ's...the ones with the feet...can't use perfume...allergies...but I'll sparkle on so vanilla extract...LOL...maybe he'll want to make cup cakes later...LOL...xxoo love
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Just so long as they are chocolate cupcakes, he's a chocoholic don't forget!! LOL! And I wouldn't worry about the perfume, they weren't much into bathing back in those days!!! LOL :) I'm sure he'd love the pjs, LOL! I'm off to bed now with a giggle and huge smile, goodnight my dear friend. xxxxxx
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goodnight!!!...sweet dreams...xxoo love
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I am so sorry to hear about your brother, I wish him a speedy recovery. I absolutely love your use of english dialect as it is so refreshing as I am from the North of England. You add a heart, a deep emotion and feeling to your writing. The time travelling part is just a bonus though very skillfully done. I enjoyed every word and did not find any errors at all. Superb writing and take care, kind regards Meia xx
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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I am so sorry to hear about your brother, I wish him a speedy recovery. I absolutely love your use of english dialect as it is so refreshing as I am from the North of England. You add a heart, a deep emotion and feeling to your writing. The time travelling part is just a bonus though very skillfully done. I enjoyed every word and did not find any errors at all. Superb writing and take care, kind regards Meia xx
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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We are at opposite ends of England, I'm in Southampton. I'm really pleased you enjoyed the dialect, I love listening to the way different counties speak. Thank you so much for the lovely review, Meia, and the nice thoughts on my brother-in-law. He is improving daily. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Curly Girly
This was a really sad chapter to read.
I can just imagine the turmoil inside the poor young girl. She's confided in her best friend about Daveth, and now her friend is attacking her for lying.
What a confused situation!
How could a mother help? It's impossible.
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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This was a really sad chapter to read.
I can just imagine the turmoil inside the poor young girl. She's confided in her best friend about Daveth, and now her friend is attacking her for lying.
What a confused situation!
How could a mother help? It's impossible.
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Nicole, for your lovely review. ~It was fortunate that Mildred knew how to handle it and put the smile back on her face. Now she has her best friend back, all's well. :) Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
Glad to hear he's doing well.
Now what? Veronica's back in Joe's time. This will be interesting. As always.
I bet she got a surprise when she realized who she was hugging. LOL
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Glad to hear he's doing well.
Now what? Veronica's back in Joe's time. This will be interesting. As always.
I bet she got a surprise when she realized who she was hugging. LOL
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
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Bless you, Yvonne!! Thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars, yours was the first review and to get a 6 for it has made my day! I'll be walking around with a big smile on my face. More surprises in store! Big hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxxx
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I can hardly wait.
