This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Emergency Meeting"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Joy Graham
Well hello again,
I'm tucked in bed with my feet up reading your chapters. My back is giving me troubles so I'm resting it in the new bed. I can adjust the foot of the bed as well as the head of the bed.
Sorry about your brother-in-law's heart attack. I hope he's better by now?
Sounds we've gone back in time. Yay!
Joy xx
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Well hello again,
I'm tucked in bed with my feet up reading your chapters. My back is giving me troubles so I'm resting it in the new bed. I can adjust the foot of the bed as well as the head of the bed.
Sorry about your brother-in-law's heart attack. I hope he's better by now?
Sounds we've gone back in time. Yay!
Joy xx
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Gosh, yes, Brian is well recovered now. He's now respecting his age. It was a bit of a shock to him that he was no longer a teenager! LOL. Is your back problems due to the hip problems? Pain can be so draining. We have a bed like yours, as both graham and I have back injuries. They are independent of each other but in the same king-size base.Okay, you are now asleep and I've just got up. I had a nice surprise too, I won Book of the Month. I honestly didn't think I would as there are some amazing books in the list. I'm so chuffed. :) xx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Oh my, back in time for Miss V. How funny to become aware that she's back there by cuddling with Joe... I'm sure James would actually find it rather amusing, as it probably really threw her off!
Nice twist ending to the chapter, Sandra.
I am curious what The Powers That Be have in store. :-)
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Oh my, back in time for Miss V. How funny to become aware that she's back there by cuddling with Joe... I'm sure James would actually find it rather amusing, as it probably really threw her off!
Nice twist ending to the chapter, Sandra.
I am curious what The Powers That Be have in store. :-)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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The powers that be want her to correct their mistake among other things. :)) Thank you so much for reading this, my friend. I know you enjoy reading and hope you will always be honest with me. Big hugs!! xx Sandra
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice work, Sandra. I think I missed another part. I've been crazy busy. I enjoyed this and was able to get back into the story. Nice cliff hanger.
My son had gone and I was in the bare sitting room of the cottage.--suggest a comma before and.
looking forward to more,
Russell
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Nice work, Sandra. I think I missed another part. I've been crazy busy. I enjoyed this and was able to get back into the story. Nice cliff hanger.
My son had gone and I was in the bare sitting room of the cottage.--suggest a comma before and.
looking forward to more,
Russell
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Not to worry, Russell, I'm just pleased you come and read it when you have the time. We all have lives outside Fanstory. Thank you so much for pointing out the missing comma, I'll fix that now. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from MelB
Another wonderful chapter to your story, Sandra! It reminded me of when my son was young and had anxiety at school which was causing him to throw up. I'm glad to hear the family member is okay too.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Another wonderful chapter to your story, Sandra! It reminded me of when my son was young and had anxiety at school which was causing him to throw up. I'm glad to hear the family member is okay too.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Melissa. I know what you mean, a lot of what goes in with children in my story, does come from personal experience. Kids do have a hard time at school when they admit to something like that. Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Cousin.
"Not being privy to such mundane occurrences as the life and death of mere mortals!" (lol. Mundane indeed.)
"1991
"I've got a tummy ache, Mummy," Ann moaned when I went to get her ready for school. "I think I should stay home today." (Fantastic transition.)
"er forehead didn't feel hot, and apart from an exaggerated (s)crunching up of her face,"
"that Daveth is just a pretend friend" (Ouch! The cat's out of the bag I fear.)
"My tummy ache is all better, Mummy. I think I can go to school now." (lol)
"As much as this is right nice, I don't think me wife'll like you and me cuddling up like this." (EeeeeK!)
Wow! What a powerful finish to leave the readers in suspense with. As always, your dialogue is superb and the British accent shines through beautifully.
Another great chapter with no errors that I could spot.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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G'day Cousin.
"Not being privy to such mundane occurrences as the life and death of mere mortals!" (lol. Mundane indeed.)
"1991
"I've got a tummy ache, Mummy," Ann moaned when I went to get her ready for school. "I think I should stay home today." (Fantastic transition.)
"er forehead didn't feel hot, and apart from an exaggerated (s)crunching up of her face,"
"that Daveth is just a pretend friend" (Ouch! The cat's out of the bag I fear.)
"My tummy ache is all better, Mummy. I think I can go to school now." (lol)
"As much as this is right nice, I don't think me wife'll like you and me cuddling up like this." (EeeeeK!)
Wow! What a powerful finish to leave the readers in suspense with. As always, your dialogue is superb and the British accent shines through beautifully.
Another great chapter with no errors that I could spot.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Bless your heart, dear Cousin! Thank you so very much for another of your amazing reviews and all those shiny stars!! You really are wonderful!! Biggest ever hugs winging their way to you! xxxxxx Sandra xxxxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again you left a fantastic hook. I can't wait for more. I like the way the little girl issue was handled.
Mildred knelt down and took Ann's hand. (knelt indicates down, so the down isn't needed)
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Once again you left a fantastic hook. I can't wait for more. I like the way the little girl issue was handled.
Mildred knelt down and took Ann's hand. (knelt indicates down, so the down isn't needed)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much, Barbara, for this lovely review and for the pick-up on the kneeling, I've changed the line now. That's the second pick-up I've had, the earlier one was where I put... 'shrugged his shoulders... I was told not to put shoulders as that's all you can shrug!! LOL. I will definitely not make either of those mistakes again. Thank you, my friend, it truly is lovely that you let me know about this one. Big hugs!! xx Sandra xx
Comment from alexisleech
I really enjoyed this chapter, Sandra, and I'm so relieved Joe isn't inside Michael any more. I also loved the twist at the end, with the 'real' Joe finding himself being cuddled by Veronica. I can well imagine the shock that would give them both.
I can't wait to see where you take us next on this magical journey!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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I really enjoyed this chapter, Sandra, and I'm so relieved Joe isn't inside Michael any more. I also loved the twist at the end, with the 'real' Joe finding himself being cuddled by Veronica. I can well imagine the shock that would give them both.
I can't wait to see where you take us next on this magical journey!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much, Alexis, for the wonderful 6 stars and fantastic review!! I really appreciate you! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Sandra,
The intercutting with the 'controllers' is very well done and adds depth to the work.
Very nice instalment... technically sound too.
Nice end
G
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Hi Sandra,
The intercutting with the 'controllers' is very well done and adds depth to the work.
Very nice instalment... technically sound too.
Nice end
G
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much, G, for this wonderful review! Your comments really made my day. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from c_lucas
I don't think time travel could bring more confusion to the world, then politics is already doing. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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I don't think time travel could bring more confusion to the world, then politics is already doing. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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You are so right there, Charlie. Thank you so much, my friend. xx Sandra
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You are welcome, Sandra. Charlie
Comment from aryr
Oh my goodness, Sandra, such a terrible experience, I am so glad he is okay. Good healing thoughts. this was an enjoyable chapter. It showed that the committee did at least acknowledge that they had made an error, that they were responsible and that they needed to fix things. I really liked how Mildred handled Ann's problem. And how ironic that Veronica travelled again. Great job, very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Oh my goodness, Sandra, such a terrible experience, I am so glad he is okay. Good healing thoughts. this was an enjoyable chapter. It showed that the committee did at least acknowledge that they had made an error, that they were responsible and that they needed to fix things. I really liked how Mildred handled Ann's problem. And how ironic that Veronica travelled again. Great job, very enjoyable.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much, Alie, for this lovely review, and for all your support. And also, thank you for your healing thoughts for my brother-in-law. That is so kind of you. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
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You are most welcome on both accounts. Hugs back to you my friend.
