A Need for Love
A Villanelle91 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Hi, Tony, excellent villanelle, my friend. There aren't enough of these written here. Your refrains flow seamlessly into the poem. Excellent work~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Hi, Tony, excellent villanelle, my friend. There aren't enough of these written here. Your refrains flow seamlessly into the poem. Excellent work~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks, Debbie. A tricky form, but satisfying when it works well. It's a while since I've tried one.. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Oh, my, my, my. This poem also grabs my heart. This something that I have said in different ways many times before. Some times, many time the world just becomes to much to bare and we all need this reassurance from someone who really loves us, be it a hug, a hold, a smile, a needed conversation. Just give some kind of care and attention to my need to comfort my aching soul.
Beautiful Fawcus, just splendidly amazing.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Oh, my, my, my. This poem also grabs my heart. This something that I have said in different ways many times before. Some times, many time the world just becomes to much to bare and we all need this reassurance from someone who really loves us, be it a hug, a hold, a smile, a needed conversation. Just give some kind of care and attention to my need to comfort my aching soul.
Beautiful Fawcus, just splendidly amazing.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your kind and sensitive review, Tier. You echo my thoughts exactly! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Analie Shepherd
Lovely poem! Captures the tender heart of a child in a way that a child could never put into words, and yet feels so deeply.
As always, I love reading your poetry.
Blessings, Analie
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Lovely poem! Captures the tender heart of a child in a way that a child could never put into words, and yet feels so deeply.
As always, I love reading your poetry.
Blessings, Analie
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your review and kind words, Analie. Appreciated, as always! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Tony.
Beautiful work, mate in this incredibly tough form. The picture is priceless and a perfect compliment to the piece.
Life can be tough at that age but they have a way of overcoming and getting back on the horse.
Great job, cobber.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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G'day Tony.
Beautiful work, mate in this incredibly tough form. The picture is priceless and a perfect compliment to the piece.
Life can be tough at that age but they have a way of overcoming and getting back on the horse.
Great job, cobber.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your review, Fez. Appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with a very true story about fear. Great picture to make it all complete. Good rhyming and word flow as you tell of how a little one can feel as they need the love and comfort of an adult.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Good poem with a very true story about fear. Great picture to make it all complete. Good rhyming and word flow as you tell of how a little one can feel as they need the love and comfort of an adult.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your review, GW. Appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND
THE PICTURE IS PRICELESS IT READ
WELL AND SMOOTHLIY I LIKED
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN MY FRIEND
THE PICTURE IS PRICELESS IT READ
WELL AND SMOOTHLIY I LIKED
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your review, Abby. Appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from marybell1
You wrote a beautiful poem "A Need For Love". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose a most appropriate and lovely photo.
All the best
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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You wrote a beautiful poem "A Need For Love". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose a most appropriate and lovely photo.
All the best
Marybell1.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your review, Marybell. Appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from RGstar
I recognized the form, though I could have been wrong. Nicely rotated with the repeating lines that bring purpose and charm to the write. Sometimes, if not incorporated properly, can be the glaze odf disaster for any form. This was a little more special because of the personal touch.
Well done, Tony.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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I recognized the form, though I could have been wrong. Nicely rotated with the repeating lines that bring purpose and charm to the write. Sometimes, if not incorporated properly, can be the glaze odf disaster for any form. This was a little more special because of the personal touch.
Well done, Tony.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your review, RG. Appreciated, as always! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful read and poem I really like this format as it rhymes and flows very well and thank you for the notes very helpful for those wanting to try new styles very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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What a wonderful read and poem I really like this format as it rhymes and flows very well and thank you for the notes very helpful for those wanting to try new styles very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your review, kahpot. Appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the photo, Tony.
-Format is good with good rhyme and
repeated lines.
-I really like the theme and message of
the poem:
"...the world is all too much to bear"
-Then, it is when we need love and
someone who cares enough
to share a simple gesture to calm us.
-An excellent conclusion that is all too true;
we never get too old for that tender touch,
hug, or caring words.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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-Thanks for sharing the photo, Tony.
-Format is good with good rhyme and
repeated lines.
-I really like the theme and message of
the poem:
"...the world is all too much to bear"
-Then, it is when we need love and
someone who cares enough
to share a simple gesture to calm us.
-An excellent conclusion that is all too true;
we never get too old for that tender touch,
hug, or caring words.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Very many thanks for reading this one, despite the fact that when I made my last edit, I forgot to change the font back to white! I must be getting senile! Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, it's true - we all need a little tender loving care at times! LOL Thank you very much for the six-star award. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
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It's funny, but I read it yesterday, but when I reviewed today, I thought the brightness level was low on my computer! I could see enough to get the lines, though. Things like this happen to those of us in a similar age bracket:) TLC goes a long way for anyone. You are very welcome and deserving of the rating and review, Tony, but it's hard to see a little one a bit sad.
