When I Get Blue
I Think Of You16 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
fd,
What a lovely, lovely poem about love that was, and was lost - or about a love that you'd like to have. Either way, it's lonesome and sad, and beautiful. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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fd,
What a lovely, lovely poem about love that was, and was lost - or about a love that you'd like to have. Either way, it's lonesome and sad, and beautiful. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
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Comment from Teri7
This is a truly beautiful and sad, but romantic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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This is a truly beautiful and sad, but romantic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
hello Fastdigits. Isn't it the truth. "In the last moments before the dawn, I hold you close before you're gone, For a moment it did seem, this was real, not just a dream"
I understand that. It's one of those things that seem so real you could take a bite out of it and then before you can, you've come back to something that pales in insignificance. Well written. Enjoyed this one. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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hello Fastdigits. Isn't it the truth. "In the last moments before the dawn, I hold you close before you're gone, For a moment it did seem, this was real, not just a dream"
I understand that. It's one of those things that seem so real you could take a bite out of it and then before you can, you've come back to something that pales in insignificance. Well written. Enjoyed this one. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
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Comment from For better for verse
Enjoyed your poem very much, It really touched something inside me, and your words are absolutely spot on.
I dont know that i may be different from anybody else, but although i have had many loves in my life, really there has been just one......a long time ago.
Your poem brought it all back to me.
Great job...well done.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Enjoyed your poem very much, It really touched something inside me, and your words are absolutely spot on.
I dont know that i may be different from anybody else, but although i have had many loves in my life, really there has been just one......a long time ago.
Your poem brought it all back to me.
Great job...well done.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
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Comment from June Sargent
A bittersweet poem reflecting on days gone by when you reached for moonbeams together. You've painted a lovely picture of a love that's never-ending, kept alive with words that waltz in the air. Beautiful sentiments eloquently expressed. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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A bittersweet poem reflecting on days gone by when you reached for moonbeams together. You've painted a lovely picture of a love that's never-ending, kept alive with words that waltz in the air. Beautiful sentiments eloquently expressed. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
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Comment from Lucian Carter
Once again, I feel the rug pulled out from under me. I was bouncing happily along your poem, like a frolicking bunny. Then along comes your ending, a hunter with a shotgun.
Good rhymes, great flow. Very nice work.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Once again, I feel the rug pulled out from under me. I was bouncing happily along your poem, like a frolicking bunny. Then along comes your ending, a hunter with a shotgun.
Good rhymes, great flow. Very nice work.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
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Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, so beautiful! You should have entered this in the upcoming love contest! I love the phrase, 'I write you words that waltz on air'....just magical!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Oh, so beautiful! You should have entered this in the upcoming love contest! I love the phrase, 'I write you words that waltz on air'....just magical!! Blessings...
Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Fastdigits
= Beautifully written love story.
= Your choice of artwork compliments your poem as well.
= Well scribed and presented.
Cheers, J (*<*)
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hi, Fastdigits
= Beautifully written love story.
= Your choice of artwork compliments your poem as well.
= Well scribed and presented.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
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Comment from Oatmeal
FASTDIGITS,
Very nicely written work. Perfectly arranged. The formatting is wonderful. Very enchanted flow of words. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Understandable.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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FASTDIGITS,
Very nicely written work. Perfectly arranged. The formatting is wonderful. Very enchanted flow of words. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Understandable.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Romantic thoughts of a moment in time when our mind plays tricks on us and reality is sprinkled with dreams that bring us pleasure. A delightful write and perfect rhymes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Romantic thoughts of a moment in time when our mind plays tricks on us and reality is sprinkled with dreams that bring us pleasure. A delightful write and perfect rhymes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
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