Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

We are summer going into fall and have the same unusually high temperataures so I kinds reversed the wording of your piece for us.lol Nicely stated

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

hehe thanks so much Barb thanks for reviewing

dip

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Surfs up? Summer is wonderful and I hope you have a great one! Loved the poem although not on the metric system here so 30degrees means something else entirely here. Great rhythm and good rhymes that are natural and unforced. Made me want to open a beer.

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

Thanks again Sandy yeah 30 deg C is pretty hot for spring in Australia I know that much

dip

reply by sandy montgomery on 24-Sep-2017

30 degress Fahrenheit is a little below freezing. Lol.

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

yeah I figured that we didn't go metric until 1966
I think 32 deg F is freezing if I remember

dip

reply by sandy montgomery on 24-Sep-2017

Yes. But we are getting ready for winter here so it won't be long till we are seeing our own 30 degree days.

Comment from Possummagic

Excellent

This is a nice reminder that summer is getting closer. Personally it can't get here quickly enough, I'm totally over summer. It rhymes nicely and has a good flow, not forced in any way. Good luck. PM

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017

Thanks so much possum much appreciated as always