The hummingbird
A precious creature12 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Aww hummy...oops I mean honey, this was sooooooo cute and sweet.
Your little ditty sang from the FS tree tops.
I'm a feeling sixy.
Pxx
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Aww hummy...oops I mean honey, this was sooooooo cute and sweet.
Your little ditty sang from the FS tree tops.
I'm a feeling sixy.
Pxx
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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I love it when you feel sixy
Is it ok if I fantasize about your sweet ditties they really stand out lol
dip
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They're not big ditties you know
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well they are fun ditties and that's all that matters I am not motor boating them lol
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What the fuck is motor boating them?
That sounds positively danger-us.
LOL
Yep, when I handle them it's fun.
The ditties.
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its something done with the mouth between ditties lol surely you have experienced it apparently chicks love it haha
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oh fucking dear sweet ditties
land ahoy haha
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Like a running engine...some tongue action?
Ahh I think I'm gettin'it LMAO
Seriously, they like this?
I would be cracking up laughing if there are sound effects LOL
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sound effects like a motor boat but then you go south and the tongue comes into play lol
TMI? lol
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Sweet Jesus...
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I suppose he could be invited as well
Comment from Thal1959
Interesting last line, D., as the hummingbird is not a song bird. Oh, well. They certainly are strange little creatures - how about writing a poem about how hummingbirds kiss? That's got to be a challenge for them.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Interesting last line, D., as the hummingbird is not a song bird. Oh, well. They certainly are strange little creatures - how about writing a poem about how hummingbirds kiss? That's got to be a challenge for them.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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no it hums songs lol
are you having a lend of me? lol
thanks as always thal
dip
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No - I think its is just that I would have taken a different approach. But that's why some poems are surprisingly good - they are written from a perspective the reader is surprised at.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a cutie. Love this poem Dr D. I love birds. Good job with the rhymes & smooth flow. Your poem describes this little bird well. Thanks for sharing.
[hummingbird is 1 word most of the time]. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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What a cutie. Love this poem Dr D. I love birds. Good job with the rhymes & smooth flow. Your poem describes this little bird well. Thanks for sharing.
[hummingbird is 1 word most of the time]. Jan
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much Jan. the poem was totally inspired by the photo which was a shared photo on Facebook.
dip
Comment from Susanjohn
Short and sweet for sure but I love it!!. I enjoy watching these little birds in my garden...they are just fascinating!....it also is bringing a smile to my face as hummingbird was a nickname from long ago :-)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Short and sweet for sure but I love it!!. I enjoy watching these little birds in my garden...they are just fascinating!....it also is bringing a smile to my face as hummingbird was a nickname from long ago :-)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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The picture was a shared photo on Facebook and it inspired these words. Thankyou as always for the review Susan
xxdip
Comment from sandy montgomery
I forgot that as we here in the states are moving toward winter you are gearing up for summer. I liked your poem as it brought back a sweet memory of my mother in law rescuing one and cleaning spider webs off its tiny feathers. It was amazing to watch.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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I forgot that as we here in the states are moving toward winter you are gearing up for summer. I liked your poem as it brought back a sweet memory of my mother in law rescuing one and cleaning spider webs off its tiny feathers. It was amazing to watch.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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You know its funny. I have never seen one up close before. This wonderful photo was a shared photo on Facebook that inspired the words
dip
Comment from damommy
Sweet poem to herald in the hummingbirds. Sadly, winter is approaching here and they've all gone.
Like the rhyming of summer and hummer. 8-)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Sweet poem to herald in the hummingbirds. Sadly, winter is approaching here and they've all gone.
Like the rhyming of summer and hummer. 8-)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much Yvonne. summer is fast approaching here in Australia So there are many birds making their presense. This was a shared photo on Facebook that inspired my words.
dip
Comment from Pantygynt
This is lovely. Well done, Dip. Some good rhymes and rhythms here. A tiny poem for a tiny bird. IO wanted a tiny review too but Fanstory wont let me off with less than 150 characters.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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This is lovely. Well done, Dip. Some good rhymes and rhythms here. A tiny poem for a tiny bird. IO wanted a tiny review too but Fanstory wont let me off with less than 150 characters.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Wow Thankyou so much Panty my words are simple but apt. The photo was a shared photo off Facebook and totally inspired my words
thanks as always for the review
dip
Comment from Teri7
Dip, I truly love this poem about this beautiful little bird. You used a very good picture of it and used very good wording too. It was a joy to read and review! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Dip, I truly love this poem about this beautiful little bird. You used a very good picture of it and used very good wording too. It was a joy to read and review! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Teri thank you so much. It was the photo that totally inspired my words.
dip
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Dip. Wow I didn't know how tiny the hummingbird really was until I saw the relationship of the bird to the fingers. I love your write about them too. So soft and elegant. Nice work mate. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Hi Dip. Wow I didn't know how tiny the hummingbird really was until I saw the relationship of the bird to the fingers. I love your write about them too. So soft and elegant. Nice work mate. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thanks again Deb much appreciated
dip
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I do hope this is not you holding this precious little one.
I love to watch them flit among my flowers with the speed of lightening. They are fun to watch and you captured him perfectly
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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I do hope this is not you holding this precious little one.
I love to watch them flit among my flowers with the speed of lightening. They are fun to watch and you captured him perfectly
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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No it was a shared photo on Facebook. Whether it has fallen from the nest I am not sure I don't know if this shot is just a chick or fully grown cute bird though
thanks for commenting as always I appreciate your words
dip
