Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a wonderful confirmation of the great I AM. A beautifully expressed poem of faith and knowledge that we are never alone in our struggles and triumphs. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017

Thank you for the great review, Marilyn.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

You did an excellent free verse contest entry and I love the way you took the piece from the Bible...I Am and added just what He is

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017

Thank you for the great review, Barb..

Comment from MelB

Excellent

A wonderful free verse poem that made me think of the song with the same title. He really does hold all these truths and more. A pity so many miss it.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017

Thank you for the great review, Melissa.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for this lovely poem of God's reassurances to us. Indeed, if He were not always with us, how could we face even the best of days? It's a blessing to remember and be reminded that He is the Great I AM.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Thanks for your great review, Helen.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written free verse poem. He is a great Father and Savior. He look after us and He invite us to be with Him even we find ourselves unworthy, He wants to save us.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Thanks for your great review, Sandra.

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

I liked the repeating ideas in your verse. " I am with you always/forever, forevermore."
This really ties your work together. I like the indentions you used. It made your work flow well. In my reread I noticed the repeated use of I Am as used in the Bible referring to the name God gave himself when speaking to Moses. That was clever and again ties back into the theme of God's eternal presence. This piece is very well written and probably deserving of a six. I don't have one to give though.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Thanks for your great review, Sandy.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Patricia,

Again you've written a beautiful poem.
I have really enjoyed reading it too.
Thank you for sharing it with me.

Kat

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Thanks for your great review, Kat.

reply by MizKat on 23-Sep-2017

You're welcome. Kat

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your free-verse spiritual poem. Your speaking in the voice of God makes the proclamation very effective. Best wishes in the contest and have a serene weekend when it arrives- Joan

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Thanks for your great review, Joan.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi Patricia;
thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem about how much love He has for all of us. Your entry in the free verse poetry contest moves along with the feeling of a fervent prayer,

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Thanks for your great review, Patty.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A warm and caring write Patricia, from God's perspective and he is making us all ready for heaven, but not yet a while please, there's too much living to be done! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Thanks for your great review, Dolly.