Sea Of Stone
A beginning.13 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
A stark way to advertise your possible novel ( not meant unkindly). I find it a harsh the way people's remains are so tightly packed. I want to call cemeteries God's SardIne Cans! But with the population living longer, the space is limited. There is no good solution, but plastic flowers are nasty.
I enjoyed your real life introduction. Your story is well expressed had emotional impact for me, and I found nothing to change
Hugs,Trisha
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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A stark way to advertise your possible novel ( not meant unkindly). I find it a harsh the way people's remains are so tightly packed. I want to call cemeteries God's SardIne Cans! But with the population living longer, the space is limited. There is no good solution, but plastic flowers are nasty.
I enjoyed your real life introduction. Your story is well expressed had emotional impact for me, and I found nothing to change
Hugs,Trisha
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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I'm glad you liked it, Trisha.
Thanks for the shiny stars.
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Denada
Comment from royowen
Some excellent characters as a line up for your future story, you seemed to have done your preparation, a good choice of focus is the graveyard, well done, Maria, I'm sure you'll do a good job, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Some excellent characters as a line up for your future story, you seemed to have done your preparation, a good choice of focus is the graveyard, well done, Maria, I'm sure you'll do a good job, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about the grave stones that look like a sea of stones in the middle of nowhere. Each grave has a story to tell about the one who lies there six feet under ground.
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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A very well-written story about the grave stones that look like a sea of stones in the middle of nowhere. Each grave has a story to tell about the one who lies there six feet under ground.
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Sandra.
