Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

I like this quite a lot. It's quirky feel is a pleasant read. This would be fun to recite. Great rhythm. I enjoyed the mood and flow of this piece. I saw no spag and the form seemed just spot on for the content. Grear job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017

---

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020

Thank you for reading it.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

When a man
loves a woman...

Bells may toll,
they may ring-
but from the heart
one hears
not a thing.
As the seasons go by,
and the leaves start to dry,
man turns inward
and bids love goodbye. What a wonderful write well done love meia xx

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017

---

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020

Thank you, my dear.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Excellent poetic form with smooth rhyme and a clear musical feel to your words. The emotions of the man hoping to spark some love in the woman comes through strong in your words.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017

---

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020

Thank you.