Woman, Man's Soul Gift
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
Excellent. This is a perfect commentary on the mating game. You capture the essence of each and show what goes on beneath the surface. Very well-done
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Excellent. This is a perfect commentary on the mating game. You capture the essence of each and show what goes on beneath the surface. Very well-done
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Thomas.
Comment from DR DIP
Nothing worse or demoralizing then a man's courting rejected. A man scorned can break his heart. We have feelings too you know lol great words and I like the layout aswell
dip
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Nothing worse or demoralizing then a man's courting rejected. A man scorned can break his heart. We have feelings too you know lol great words and I like the layout aswell
dip
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Dip.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Beautiful words of loved and devotion bringing together man and woman in matrimony and a union lasting a lifetime, sentimental and romantic, best wishes, love Dolly x
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Beautiful words of loved and devotion bringing together man and woman in matrimony and a union lasting a lifetime, sentimental and romantic, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from fastdigits
A beautiful dance of words that poetically and
artistically pirouette down the page in cadence
of what life is as the years churn along the pathways
of time.
Well done
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A beautiful dance of words that poetically and
artistically pirouette down the page in cadence
of what life is as the years churn along the pathways
of time.
Well done
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Pretty nice poetry in your
review stanza, my dear.
Thank you,
Doug
Comment from estory
I liked all the ringing rhymes swinging throughout this poem, it was very musical, great rhythm too. You get that great sense of this dance, these partners swirling around each other in the game of seduction. Maybe it could use an image to color it up a bit. Otherwise, nice poem! estory
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I liked all the ringing rhymes swinging throughout this poem, it was very musical, great rhythm too. You get that great sense of this dance, these partners swirling around each other in the game of seduction. Maybe it could use an image to color it up a bit. Otherwise, nice poem! estory
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you, sir.
Comment from Bichon
A beautiful poem. It is very well written and pleasant to read. This also seems like it was written from the heart and very truthful. Great read overall!
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A beautiful poem. It is very well written and pleasant to read. This also seems like it was written from the heart and very truthful. Great read overall!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. Life would be so much easier when men and women will tell each other exactly how they feel about each other instead of playing guessing games.
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. Life would be so much easier when men and women will tell each other exactly how they feel about each other instead of playing guessing games.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from pome lover
well, the title is certainly wonderful. What a neat thing to say.
So she finally turned and looked. hooray! What would we do without hope? (that would be a good title, too.) :)
I like the way you broke the lines. It's an art, knowing when it's beneficial. (Hopefully that's not the standard format for some kind of poem).
At any rate, I liked it. very good.
pome lover
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well, the title is certainly wonderful. What a neat thing to say.
So she finally turned and looked. hooray! What would we do without hope? (that would be a good title, too.) :)
I like the way you broke the lines. It's an art, knowing when it's beneficial. (Hopefully that's not the standard format for some kind of poem).
At any rate, I liked it. very good.
pome lover
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from Fridayauthor
This poem has a nice smooth flow to it. It's a different look at man versus woman relationship that pauses one to consider the sometimes importance of something as simple as a smile.
I like this posting very much. It causes one to stop and think.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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This poem has a nice smooth flow to it. It's a different look at man versus woman relationship that pauses one to consider the sometimes importance of something as simple as a smile.
I like this posting very much. It causes one to stop and think.
Thank you.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from robyn corum
Victor,
If I'm reading this right...you sure are giving the woman in the relationship a lot of power. Hahaha. That hasn't always been the case in the romances I've known in my own life.
Not until this last one, thank heavens!!
Cool write!
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Victor,
If I'm reading this right...you sure are giving the woman in the relationship a lot of power. Hahaha. That hasn't always been the case in the romances I've known in my own life.
Not until this last one, thank heavens!!
Cool write!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2020
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Smiling. Thank you.
