Woman, Man's Soul Gift
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Comment from nomi338
Indeed, when a man truly loves a woman, he opens himself to all kinds of trouble. His heart is vulnerable to all sorts of things, uncertainty, fear, jealousy, shyness. All the things that he shunned before are now his constant companions as he now must fear losing her, the one he holds dear.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Indeed, when a man truly loves a woman, he opens himself to all kinds of trouble. His heart is vulnerable to all sorts of things, uncertainty, fear, jealousy, shyness. All the things that he shunned before are now his constant companions as he now must fear losing her, the one he holds dear.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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You really do understand things, don't you?
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77 years of life, 47 years of marriage to the same woman. Oh yes.
Comment from Bucketlist
A refreshing write about men's sentiments for a change. I enjoyed the flow, rhymn, and life stages in a man's relationships Thank you for sharing a different view of love.
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A refreshing write about men's sentiments for a change. I enjoyed the flow, rhymn, and life stages in a man's relationships Thank you for sharing a different view of love.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Woman, Man's Soul Gift" is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to reading your next post.
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"Woman, Man's Soul Gift" is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to reading your next post.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Thank you.
You're welcome.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yes, Doug, and when a man in love sees, he sees perfection because--as we know all too well--love is truly blind.
It's true; I've seen it happen time and time and time again.
You hear your friends saying things like, "I wonder what the hell he sees in her?", but the truth is, he doesn't see at all.
He's been blinded by loves light.
When a man loves a woman ... he can't keep his mind on nothin' else.
Excellent free verse, my friend.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Yes, Doug, and when a man in love sees, he sees perfection because--as we know all too well--love is truly blind.
It's true; I've seen it happen time and time and time again.
You hear your friends saying things like, "I wonder what the hell he sees in her?", but the truth is, he doesn't see at all.
He's been blinded by loves light.
When a man loves a woman ... he can't keep his mind on nothin' else.
Excellent free verse, my friend.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Very nice review, my friend. And...very true.
Comment from Oatmeal
VICTORTOUCHE,
Your feelings are well expressed. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible. The poem flowed smoothly.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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VICTORTOUCHE,
Your feelings are well expressed. The theme was excellent! Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible. The poem flowed smoothly.
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you, my dear.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I felt like you were describing my brother. He's been unlucky in love 3 times and now has given up hope. Sad outlook. I liked the tight lines of this. Very rhythmic. Great job. Gretchen
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I felt like you were describing my brother. He's been unlucky in love 3 times and now has given up hope. Sad outlook. I liked the tight lines of this. Very rhythmic. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Gretchen.
Comment from royowen
Nothing can turn a man's head like a beautiful, and conversely, nothing gives a boost to man's psyche, than to be loved by one. They are difficult to lose. But there is nothing like the support that comes from woman that is friend and companion through life. Beautifully written, revealing a myriad of need sown within us. Well dine, blessings, Roy
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Nothing can turn a man's head like a beautiful, and conversely, nothing gives a boost to man's psyche, than to be loved by one. They are difficult to lose. But there is nothing like the support that comes from woman that is friend and companion through life. Beautifully written, revealing a myriad of need sown within us. Well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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A myriad of need sown within us. Very nicely said.
Thank you, Roy.
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Well done
Comment from frierajac
I understand this to be along the lines of a lyric, although not to the tune of.
The illustration that looks to me like gypsies enmeshed in their own time, is
perfect with this. It makes me want to be creative myself and that's good.
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I understand this to be along the lines of a lyric, although not to the tune of.
The illustration that looks to me like gypsies enmeshed in their own time, is
perfect with this. It makes me want to be creative myself and that's good.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much.
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice love poem that shows how patience, faith and hope can bring unrequited love around to shared love. It seems this was hard sought after and well deserved for this man who didn't let hurt pride get in his way.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Nice love poem that shows how patience, faith and hope can bring unrequited love around to shared love. It seems this was hard sought after and well deserved for this man who didn't let hurt pride get in his way.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Joan.
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No problem, Doug.
Joan
Comment from tfawcus
Interesting poem. Men do keep their emotions under wraps rather more than women do in my experience. Rejection is a private matter, not to be talked about or shared. It certainly was in my day! Good to hear that this one had a happy ending for the poor fellow!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Interesting poem. Men do keep their emotions under wraps rather more than women do in my experience. Rejection is a private matter, not to be talked about or shared. It certainly was in my day! Good to hear that this one had a happy ending for the poor fellow!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Completely correct from where
I grew up, tony.
Thank you,
Doug
