Woman, Man's Soul Gift
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Comment from sue133
Yes, you've written a beauty! Things that many men must feel and think are illustrated so well in your poem. The rhyming lends itself well to the theme as it conveys 'the chase'. I really enjoyed it. Sue
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Yes, you've written a beauty! Things that many men must feel and think are illustrated so well in your poem. The rhyming lends itself well to the theme as it conveys 'the chase'. I really enjoyed it. Sue
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Sue.
Comment from Joan E.
My forty-year-old son is still a bachelor and I felt your poem was describing him. I enjoyed your rhymes and hope he experiences your happy ending. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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My forty-year-old son is still a bachelor and I felt your poem was describing him. I enjoyed your rhymes and hope he experiences your happy ending. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Joan.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a really well written poem, I loved it. I'm a big fan of rhyming poems and this is perfect in my opinion. I loved the ending as well when two people find each other. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This is a really well written poem, I loved it. I'm a big fan of rhyming poems and this is perfect in my opinion. I loved the ending as well when two people find each other. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for reading it.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello
Yes your title drew me in about how a man can love a woman day in and day out
Just one part that was not clear to me is-
So hope turns his head,
as she turned her tread-
now they both live
for the future...
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Hello
Yes your title drew me in about how a man can love a woman day in and day out
Just one part that was not clear to me is-
So hope turns his head,
as she turned her tread-
now they both live
for the future...
Gert
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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He looked at her in passing.
One final try for something.
She hesitates, and turns his way.
And the rest is their story today.
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Thank you victortouche
for explaing.
Gert
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend when a man loves a woman he will go to all extremes to capture her heart I think the woman loves being chased I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Oh yes my friend when a man loves a woman he will go to all extremes to capture her heart I think the woman loves being chased I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Jill.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful piece of poetry with a touch of sarcasm dear victor! i love the wording, it is straight forward and interesting. bravo my friend!
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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this is a beautiful piece of poetry with a touch of sarcasm dear victor! i love the wording, it is straight forward and interesting. bravo my friend!
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Rebekka.
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My pleasure entirely <3
Comment from patcelaw
This is a poignant poem and is so true. many times men will think a woman is not interested, yet he will pursues her and in the end find he has received the best gift of all, a woman. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This is a poignant poem and is so true. many times men will think a woman is not interested, yet he will pursues her and in the end find he has received the best gift of all, a woman. Patricia
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Yes, maam. Thank you.
Comment from artemis53
This one gave me some pause due to personal circumstances. I believe there is a time for everything. I had a Aunt who was widowed 25 years and then met 'Jim.' He was a wonderful man and embraced her as well as the family. They lived a wonderful life together.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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This one gave me some pause due to personal circumstances. I believe there is a time for everything. I had a Aunt who was widowed 25 years and then met 'Jim.' He was a wonderful man and embraced her as well as the family. They lived a wonderful life together.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Now that's wonderful, is it not?
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem! I enjoyed the imagery and the flow of the piece. I especially enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Nice poem! I enjoyed the imagery and the flow of the piece. I especially enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from MsPetra
I think the artwork goes especially well with the poem.
I enjoyed this poem. I liked what you had to say.
Your rhyme and meter are spot on.
I have no suggestions for improvement. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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I think the artwork goes especially well with the poem.
I enjoyed this poem. I liked what you had to say.
Your rhyme and meter are spot on.
I have no suggestions for improvement. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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Thank you.
