Woman, Man's Soul Gift
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Comment from gudbjorg
It is the nature of a man to shy away if not met with real love and consideration by his wife. This happens every day that he has to pretend to be happy and content but inside he's desperate for true love and fellowship. I consider this poem has an important message to all as it draws out points we all have to think about and get answers from our loving Father in Heaven.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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It is the nature of a man to shy away if not met with real love and consideration by his wife. This happens every day that he has to pretend to be happy and content but inside he's desperate for true love and fellowship. I consider this poem has an important message to all as it draws out points we all have to think about and get answers from our loving Father in Heaven.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from MargaretEllen
This made me smile and feel very happy at the ending for this man and women--in fact I felt a dramatic undercurrent of tension that the man might just turn in another direction. Stepping away from your poem it almost feels like a short story-I was quite touched by your writing.Thank you!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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This made me smile and feel very happy at the ending for this man and women--in fact I felt a dramatic undercurrent of tension that the man might just turn in another direction. Stepping away from your poem it almost feels like a short story-I was quite touched by your writing.Thank you!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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No. Thank you.
Comment from Possummagic
This is a nice poem about a mans love for a woman who at first seems disinterested but then later returns his feelings. It's nicely written, not forced at all and I enjoyed reading it. PM
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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This is a nice poem about a mans love for a woman who at first seems disinterested but then later returns his feelings. It's nicely written, not forced at all and I enjoyed reading it. PM
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from johnnywickwire
I think you've done a great job of expanding on the meaning of "When a Man Loves a Woman". Yes, it's a bit more complex than that piece would have one believe, yes? I think your portrayals are on the money. This is a very poignant piece and I feel a great connection with our humanity here. :)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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I think you've done a great job of expanding on the meaning of "When a Man Loves a Woman". Yes, it's a bit more complex than that piece would have one believe, yes? I think your portrayals are on the money. This is a very poignant piece and I feel a great connection with our humanity here. :)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from smileycloud
very good free verse
not just willy-nilly words/lines which happen not to have rhyme form or meter
good story of many years passing by perhaps
man does tend to portray strength even in drought it appears to be an inbuilt inheritance
good to imagine that love won out in the later years perhaps
your characters are quite mysterious
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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very good free verse
not just willy-nilly words/lines which happen not to have rhyme form or meter
good story of many years passing by perhaps
man does tend to portray strength even in drought it appears to be an inbuilt inheritance
good to imagine that love won out in the later years perhaps
your characters are quite mysterious
have a smiley day
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from closetpoetjester
Ring a ding ding Vic...looks like she turned her tread.
Now, the only confusion is, which direction? haha
I'm kidding.
Looks like you bagged the babe...good for you. I'm sure she was keen all along, you just missed the signals perhaps LOL Anyways, it seems as though persistance pays.
Sorry, no sixual treatment today...I don't get recharged until Sunday LOL
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Ring a ding ding Vic...looks like she turned her tread.
Now, the only confusion is, which direction? haha
I'm kidding.
Looks like you bagged the babe...good for you. I'm sure she was keen all along, you just missed the signals perhaps LOL Anyways, it seems as though persistance pays.
Sorry, no sixual treatment today...I don't get recharged until Sunday LOL
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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You're a nut. But fun. Now reblaze the new one. Or if by some miracle it's sixie, wait till Sunday. LOL
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Good things cum to those that wait
I'll be over to check out your goods.
If they pass sixual muster I shall await my Sunday sixy stock.
Comment from Poetic Friend
This poem reminds me of the song "When a Man Loves a Woman." As your free flowing verse indicates, he goes through great heights to express such love.
The poem gives the reader much to ponder upon completion. Your poem will resonate with me.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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This poem reminds me of the song "When a Man Loves a Woman." As your free flowing verse indicates, he goes through great heights to express such love.
The poem gives the reader much to ponder upon completion. Your poem will resonate with me.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from alvina224224
I admire your treatment of this theme, Victor Touche. Unrequited love always provides a wealth of content, be it in poetry, narrative or counselling. Well written and congratulations on the awards. Your choice of artwork by Lillia is a good one, too, and suits the content ideally. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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I admire your treatment of this theme, Victor Touche. Unrequited love always provides a wealth of content, be it in poetry, narrative or counselling. Well written and congratulations on the awards. Your choice of artwork by Lillia is a good one, too, and suits the content ideally. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much.
Comment from crzypnter
Hi Victor,
This is a wonderfully written poem. It's packed with emotion. The flow and rhyming are seamless. Thank you for a wonderful read. God bless
August
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Hi Victor,
This is a wonderfully written poem. It's packed with emotion. The flow and rhyming are seamless. Thank you for a wonderful read. God bless
August
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Victortouche,
Nice piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Phraseology is impressive.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last lines are especially noteworthy:
"So hope turns his head,
as she turned her tread-
now they both live
for the future...
instead."
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Hello Victortouche,
Nice piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Phraseology is impressive.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last lines are especially noteworthy:
"So hope turns his head,
as she turned her tread-
now they both live
for the future...
instead."
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much.
