She is a child
A special love20 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is a very beautiful and heart touching poem you have penned about the little girl and the dad. You used such great wording and great imagery with the picture. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Dip, This is a very beautiful and heart touching poem you have penned about the little girl and the dad. You used such great wording and great imagery with the picture. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Thankyou so much Teri
dip
Comment from l.raven
HI Waves, you did a great job on your free verse poem...I have done a few...but they are not as easy as you think they would be...we are always there for our children...that is what a mom and dad do... very nicely written my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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HI Waves, you did a great job on your free verse poem...I have done a few...but they are not as easy as you think they would be...we are always there for our children...that is what a mom and dad do... very nicely written my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Thank you as always Linda, you always make my day
dip
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your soooo welcome you...always...xxoo love
Comment from country ranch writer
A mere child see the world through innocent eyes, to play and enjoy all it can bring happiness and her father is there to protect her from all that is wrong with the world.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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A mere child see the world through innocent eyes, to play and enjoy all it can bring happiness and her father is there to protect her from all that is wrong with the world.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thanks again for all your wonderful review I really appreciate you going to the trouble to read so many
dip
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written showing the true special bond between father and daughter this flows very well and written from the heart well-done regards Jill
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Yes my friend this is well written showing the true special bond between father and daughter this flows very well and written from the heart well-done regards Jill
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Thanks again Jill much appreciated
dip
Comment from June Sargent
Well, free verse seems to work here! This is a lovely poem of the special relationship between a father and a daughter - contrasting idealism with realism. Innocence in a world of tricksters. Hopeful, but realizing there will be obstacles along the way. But he will be there for her. Well done, Dip.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Well, free verse seems to work here! This is a lovely poem of the special relationship between a father and a daughter - contrasting idealism with realism. Innocence in a world of tricksters. Hopeful, but realizing there will be obstacles along the way. But he will be there for her. Well done, Dip.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Thankyou June
Comment from Pantygynt
Well, congratulations. It is a start. Go for the images . You create two good ones here, two opposites but with a common concern. Don't be frightened to pop in the odd rhyme where it might help. You have nothing to lose but your chains.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Well, congratulations. It is a start. Go for the images . You create two good ones here, two opposites but with a common concern. Don't be frightened to pop in the odd rhyme where it might help. You have nothing to lose but your chains.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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haha you funny bastard you always make me giggle free verse is not my norm so the shackles have been rattled!
thanks Panty
dip
Comment from closetpoetjester
Hey you
Nice alternate povs and something different from your nib.
The uneven lines and free verse style let the read appreciate every word without having to keep any kind of particular rhythm. I think for writes like this free verse is quite appropros...inspite of the fact I generally hate the shite! LOL
Px
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Hey you
Nice alternate povs and something different from your nib.
The uneven lines and free verse style let the read appreciate every word without having to keep any kind of particular rhythm. I think for writes like this free verse is quite appropros...inspite of the fact I generally hate the shite! LOL
Px
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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I am not a great fan either P it was just something to play around with when you're not available lol
thanks as always for your input always appreciate it I get off on it lol
dip
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Oh I'm available
LOL
for put out oops I mean out put haha
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, I just love this. I think you do extremely well at free verse, you have written this exactly as it is, but with a poignancy that poetry is allowed. Therein lies its beauty. Blessings...
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Well, I just love this. I think you do extremely well at free verse, you have written this exactly as it is, but with a poignancy that poetry is allowed. Therein lies its beauty. Blessings...
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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wow Irish your comments mean so much to me thank you
xdip
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You're most welcome, I think free verse might be your forte!!
Comment from Dean Kuch
And a wonderfully written free verse it is too, Dipster.
The key to making the most of our mistakes--whatever they might be--is to learn from them so as not to repeat them and make the same mistakes again.
Bravo, mate.
A beautifully conveyed message.
~Deano
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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And a wonderfully written free verse it is too, Dipster.
The key to making the most of our mistakes--whatever they might be--is to learn from them so as not to repeat them and make the same mistakes again.
Bravo, mate.
A beautifully conveyed message.
~Deano
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much Dean always appreciate your input
dip
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Nicely done free verse as there is truly no bad way to write it. I love the way you first gave her side and then changed to dad's. Nicely done
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Nicely done free verse as there is truly no bad way to write it. I love the way you first gave her side and then changed to dad's. Nicely done
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thank you again Barb I am glad you liked it.
dip
