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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Fall into Love"
a collection of my poetry

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Comment from sandy montgomery
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This nonet conjurs up visions of crisp colors, cool nights, and pumpkin spice lattes. I enjoyed it very much. I loved the vision of the warm woolen socks. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi;
    thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. I had a wonderful time building this nonet, and now as I am enjoying the first few days of fall, I rejoice in the coolness of the air,

    ~patty~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Oh yes my friend with autumn approaching there is a chill in the air and all the scenery colours change you describe this well it will soon be time for central heating well-done regards Jill

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi Jill;
    thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. I had a wonderful time building this nonet, and now as I am enjoying the first few days of fall, I rejoice in the coolness of the air,

    ~patty~
Comment from apky
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I love autumn, or better said, I love the autumnal colours. When all those various earth colours surface - golds, coppers, bronzes, rich browns - especially in a mixed forest, it feels warm inside.

The only thing I don't like so much is having to deal with fallen leaves!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi Aki;

    thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. I had a wonderful time building this nonet, and now as I am enjoying the first few days of fall, I rejoice in the coolness of the air,

    ~patty~
Comment from fastdigits
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A beautiful Nonet in which your poetic words
artistically paint this picture of the change of
seasons, when warmth turns to cold, when the colors
of the floral change into all sorts of dazzling colors,
and lovers cuddle in warmth and love.
Well done and good luck

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi;
    thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. I had a wonderful time building this nonet, and now as I am enjoying the first few days of fall, I rejoice in the coolness of the air,

    ~patty~
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Patty, this is a fantastic Nonet poem on Fall you've penned. I love it, I love the Fall too. Your poem is so warm and fuzzy and snuggly, lol. My Birthday's October too, we are true Fall babes:)) ~Kerry

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi there;
    thank you so much for the lovely words about this nonet. I am now enjoying the very beginning of our fall days, and I'm loving the coolness and even the rain,

    ~patty~
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 22-Sep-2017
    Oh, yes, i am enjoying it too. no rain here, but I love the rain as well:))
Comment from TAB_that's me
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This made me want some cool weather and a cup of cocoa:) No, actually, I would prefer it stay warm. Great sensory poem. Nonet is in perfect form. Good luck Patty:)

teresa

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi there;
    thank you so much for the lovely words about this nonet. I am now enjoying the very beginning of our fall days, and I'm loving the coolness and even the rain,

    ~patty~
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Very nice Patty. I agree, Fall is a beautiful season and one everyone enjoys. The bugs are gone,the heat has let up, it's harvest time! Lots of reasons. Well done my friend. Nancy

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi there;
    thank you so much for the lovely words about this nonet. I am now enjoying the very beginning of our fall days, and I'm loving the coolness and even the rain,

    ~patty~
Comment from oliver818
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I enjoyed this Autumnal poem, you created a lovely image of the season that will soon be here. I'm almost looking forward to it now. Thanks for sharing and have a great day

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi there;
    thank you so much for the lovely words about this nonet. I am now enjoying the very beginning of our fall days, and I'm loving the coolness and even the rain,

    ~patty~
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-Good descriptions about fall:
"Fall is here and cool air refreshes"
-Good use of autumn colors, too.
-I have always liked fall, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi there;
    thank you so much for the lovely words about this nonet. I am now enjoying the very beginning of our fall days, and I'm loving the coolness and even the rain,

    ~patty~
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Sep-2017
    You are quite welcome, Patty, and glad you are enjoying fall.
Comment from DR DIP
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Ah the change of the season in The southern hemisphere we are in Spring heading for summer in a couple of months. You on the other hand are in fall going into Winter hence your colourful, descriptive poem and beautiful accompanying photo.

dip

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi there;
    thank you so much for the lovely words about this nonet. I am now enjoying the very beginning of our fall days, and I'm loving the coolness and even the rain,

    ~patty~