The Death Collector
Looking into the dark dimension of dreams13 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
I have experienced, as have my sisters, this 4th dimension, and it was the same dream we shared, though we lived in three different states. It plagued us for years. Then we found out our dad had them too. When he died...they stopped. This is a great entry, blessings....
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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I have experienced, as have my sisters, this 4th dimension, and it was the same dream we shared, though we lived in three different states. It plagued us for years. Then we found out our dad had them too. When he died...they stopped. This is a great entry, blessings....
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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I've always felt that our dreams give us another dimension to life... It's so hard to explain how they seem so real, but once we awaken, realize they were only parts of our inner imagination (often stemming from a combination of real-life events)! So glad you enjoyed the poem and thank you so much for your review! Enjoy your day!
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Excellent! You're most welcome!!
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "Worst Nightmare". You rhymed it well and told a scary story. Just one quire. In verse five the last two lines I found a little confusing. You may wish to review this, though it could be me that is confused.,
All the best.
Marybell1,
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Worst Nightmare". You rhymed it well and told a scary story. Just one quire. In verse five the last two lines I found a little confusing. You may wish to review this, though it could be me that is confused.,
All the best.
Marybell1,
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much for your review and comment on verse five. Are you speaking of the lines, "With whetted sickle, glistening sharp, Commands compliancy..." Intention here was that the lurking dark figure holds a glistened sickle in his hand (silently threatening) his victim. This piece was created for a Halloween event in which they had someone dressed up in a long, dark, hooded-robe - couldn't see his face, but he was holding a long-handled silver sickle in his hand. Thanks again for your positive feedback - and let me know if this is what you meant for verse five! Enjoy your day!
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I have read and re read your poem and now I understand and agree with you. Hope this has not inconvenienced you. I like to understand what I am reviewing.
All the best.
Marybell1.
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Hi, Marybell! It was no inconvenience at all - I was happy to receive your comment and be able to answer. I'm very appreciative for review and comment on my work. I've always only written for fun, but was told I ought to try putting the series of Halloween poetry I've done into a small book. This site is giving me feedback and constructive comments needed to encourage me to pursue this. Thanks again for your review and comments. Have a wonderful evening!
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You are most welcome.
Thank you.
Marybell1.
Comment from oliver818
Creepy poem, I enjoyed it. It has good flow and rhythm and is easy to read. The creepiness is exciting. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Creepy poem, I enjoyed it. It has good flow and rhythm and is easy to read. The creepiness is exciting. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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So glad you enjoyed! I had created this several years ago and thought it would work well in the Nightmare contest, so did make a few adaptations from the original. Thanks so much for your review!
