Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I think this is a lovely 5-7-5 nature poem. Image and words work well together touting the magical tinkling of the ice-encrusted trees after a storm. Well done. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017

Thank you so much for your read and your kind words.

reply by BeasPeas on 20-Sep-2017

Hi Harry. It got my vote. A nice little poem. Marilyn

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017

Thank you. Much appreciated.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-Very good nature imagery,
especially in lines one and two.
-You have an excellent satori line.
-This is a very good entry, and I
hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Thank you for the read and the encouraging words.

reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Sep-2017

You are welcome.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you so much for sharing your lovely entry in the five-seven-five nature poetry contest. Within the correct syllable count, you gave us the feel of the piece, and the artwork you chose made a great presentation. This is pretty much what Portland, OR looks after we have an ice storm,

~patty~

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Yes, I lived in St. Louis for six years. Had these events five or six times a winter. Thanks you for the read and the comments.