Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Nicely done. Even the most outrageous storms give way to clear skies and rainbows. Always looking to the positive brings hope and faith that everything will turn out okay. Your nature 5-7-5 reinforces that. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017

Thanks.

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

beautiful word imagery
a 5/7/5 nature poem is so beautiful
you have said so very much in so few lines
your closing summing up is so positive
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017

Thank you for your wonderful review.

Comment from Octavia

Excellent

You got a lot packed into this nature 5/7/5, mystery author. The rain, flood, and rainbow at the end.
Whew. I love happy endings. Don't you?
Well done.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Yes I do. It amazes me after a torrential rain, how a rainbow appears, and the world feels right. Thank you for your review.

Comment from Dhale89

Excellent

Well done with your chosen topic, many people will go for plants or animals when writing about nature. You have selected a topic others likely won't and hopefully that will help you stand out. Nice poem and it reads well. Good job.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

That's what I was pushing for. Thank you for your review.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Aftermath, has the required syllable set up and creates the remarkable idea that storms are escaping the joyfulness that is displacing it. Sounds good from where I'm at.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Thank you for your review.