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Snow White Zombies

Are the dead really dead?

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Comment from B.B. Rose
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Well, I like this a lot and the world has certainly taken zombies to heart (not to mention other body parts). Funny thing is that I have written an entry for this contest as well and it, too, is unnerving...well, at least in my mind. I thought your last line was classic. Best wishes, Rose

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thank you for your review. Creepy critters are on every channel these days. I wish you luck also in the contest. PM
Comment from Bichon
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A very interesting flash fiction story. I enjoyed the way it was written and the language you used. I agree, everywhere you look are Zombie shows haha. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thank you so much for your feedback. PM
Comment from DR DIP
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haha straight away I thought of the TV series GAME OF THRONES with the walking dead..The white walkers. And like you say there are many shows and movies with zombies in them. Great photo of arms in a sea of snow

dip

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thanks. Every where I look three days there's another show popped up with Zombies and the like. It sticks in the mind! PM
Comment from oliver818
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Nice dribble fiction, I enjoyed it. I like the image of the Snow White zombie, it's very interesting and evocative. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition. Have a great day

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thank you for your feedback. It is much appreciated. PM
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing your entry in the Dribble flash Fiction contest. Your little story reads well, and you've structured it well. I was interested by the rhyme - it didn't read like prose.

~patty~

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    No, I may have something to learn about "dribble flash" lol thanks for the review. PM
Comment from Teri7
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You know when you write something about these type of things you sure do have too much TV in your brain! lol Very good wording and very good rhyming. Best wishes in the contest!!! Teri

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Yes that's too true. Lol thanks for the feedback. PM
Comment from Bucketlist
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Who knows where inspiration is found? This is certainly ghoulish, but creative.
Thanks for sharing,.Dean K would probably love this! No suggestions for change, good luck with contest

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thank you for your feedback. PM
reply by Bucketlist on 18-Sep-2017
    No problem
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    😊