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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend this is well written beautifully presented with the humor through the piece love the closing line I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Mrs P
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Bill. This is a clever and enjoyable write that challenges the reader to tune-in to your theme. Illustrated perfectly for your theme. A colorful and humorous acrostic. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from damommy
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Really gave me a laugh today. Private eye indeed. However, given the right circumstances, I bet he could force anyone to tell everything. lol.

Love the 'law and odor' and 'scents and sensibility.' The colored words add to the whole. Good acrostic. 8-)

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, da, for the neat review. Bill
Comment from Dawn Munro
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HAHAHA! OMG, I'm in love. Come to me, you adorable, stink-bomb. Let me cuddle and caress your intellect. Any skunk with (scents and) sensibility is a skunk this kitty wants as a play-mate. :))))))))))))))))))))

(What a clever acrostic, Bill. *grin*)

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Dawn, for the great review. Bill
reply by Dawn Munro on 18-Sep-2017
    HAhaha - My pleasure, SucSTINKT-ly. (I love skunks - I really do - from a distance, especially when walking a dog. But they are such a harmless and cute creature!)
Comment from jaded831
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Your poem is fun to read. The colorful fonts, the play on words, and the picture, all make for a great presentation. The poem itself flows easy, creates quite an image, and tells a story. Using a skunk to sniff out criminals is inspiring. Excellent job.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Jaded, for the neat review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
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Who better to sniff out wrongdoers doing wrong and raising a stink. I wager old Kaleidoscope the skunk could sniff out the deepest held secret with one might sniff, provided of course that he does not become excited and let go with an involuntary squirt of his own stink juice.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, nomi, for taking a look.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi Bill;

I do love these skunk poems. Your presentation works well. I enjoyed the highlights of certain words, and the meaning built into the lines.

~patty~

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Patty
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
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A great fun acrostic very well presented. What a lovely adjective 'Kaleidoscope' is. Just wondering why the title is 'Skunk World 10' is it part of a series?

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Gaye, for giving this a look. Yes, it is the tenth and last in the skunk series. It was preceded by ten installments each for horses, spiders,octopi, sloth, flies, and moles. Happy day.
Comment from kahpot
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What an excellent poem and read this is and in the Acrostic very well done, I am just learning and trying out ( acrostic and loop) poems and having fun trying, this is a great help to me thank you****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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haha what a fun play on words with 'odor' & 'scents'. I really like this acrostic, Bill. The picture is so perfect. Your colored font letters add to the enjoyment too. This is a great poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
    Thanks, Jan