Comment from teols2016

Excellent

Interesting you start with an imperfect character. Hope we'll get to see some of these folks' actual appointments. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017

Oh, yes! The actual appointments will be shown, but first, we have to see what makes these characters tick!

Thank you so much for reading,

~patty~

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

I reviewed and rated the first chapter. I will only try to send some helpful hints, or my opinion hints. She listened to each person tell their story...each(singular) their plural); comma after First ? it was just her family...
I did find the Chapters and am going to see which soul I connect with. Great job.

Fan Friend,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017

Hi there;
I'm glad you were able to find the chapters. Thank you for going back to read the entire story I've posted so far. I hope you are finding it entertaining,

~patty~

reply by Brigitte Elko on 15-Oct-2017

Loving it!

Brigitte

reply by Brigitte Elko on 15-Oct-2017

My pleasure.

brigitte

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Those are questions most of us will ask, or something very similar. I can see everyone getting out their Bibles, now, Patty! Excellent again, and I'm going on to the next part now. Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Hi Sandra;
thank you so much for going back and getting caught up on this story. I hope you enjoy the concept. It certainly seems like you do. Chapter 4 is posted, too.

~patty~

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Patty,

I think I read your stories out of order but that is okay. I like where you are going with this and you are keeping it intriguing. I wonder what will happen next. Good job, honey.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Hi Gypsy;
thank you so much for the read and your willingness to follow along.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story,

~patty~

Comment from Fridayauthor

Exceptional

I enjoyed the mix of serious and humor in this piece as it moves along smoothly. It is very well written in a clear and easy manner. The chapter certainly holds the reader's interest and closes with hook forward.

I look forward to more.

Thank you.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece of the story, and I hope you will follow along with the rest,

~patty~

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Pattym this is well written ans I think we may well, believe a lot like each other. When it comes to leaving and being in God's waiting room, we will I'm sure be a bit nervous. When all is said and done the only thing I see that matters is what chose to believe about the price Jesus paid for us on the cross. Patricia

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Hi Patricia;
I'm glad you are enjoying this story. It is my intention to portray my thoughts, along with Biblical quotes. I hope I can plant a few seeds, and fervently pray I do not offend anyone,

~patty~

reply by patcelaw on 22-Sep-2017

Patty, Just remember that Jesus offended people when He spoke the truth and there will be some who are offended by what we write as well.There is one here who was for a time offended by what I wrote and said, she could not read my work. I told her that was okay. From time to time she kept coming back to read what I wrote and the light came on for her and now she is born again.
God has told us that our words will not return void, so press on and keep trusting God to give you the right words. :-)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello, my friend, this is well written no one truly knows what it's going to be like when we leave the earth we just have to have faith. I enjoyed and look forward to the next chapter to find out what is through the door I am behind but trying my best to catch up well-done regards Jill

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Hi Jill

I'm glad you are enjoying this story. It is my intention to portray my thoughts, along with Biblical quotes. I hope I can plant a few seeds, and fervently pray I do not offend anyone,

~patty~

Comment from Marvin Calloway

Exceptional

This story couldn't possibly offend anyone.
I was hanging on every word and surprised when it ended. But of course you haven't finished yet. Looking forward to more.
I don't think heaven will be much like this, but I want to read your idea.
Marv

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017

Hi Marv;
I'm glad you are enjoying this story. It is my intention to portray my thoughts, along with Biblical quotes. I hope I can plant a few seeds, and fervently pray I do not offend anyone,

~patty~
(thank you so much for the sixth star; and you will see some of my thoughts and beliefs may not be shared by others.)

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

Who wouldn't begin to question their true motives and thoughts in one of eternity's waiting rooms?
In spite of her concerns about potentially impending doom, her introspection, Janelle is still herself. It's hard to leave self behind even when trying to do so. Ex) Big Nose.
Looking forward to the next installment. :)

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi there
thank you so much for the lovely review. The next installment should be out shortly,

~patty~

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

I love the story, Patty and do not feel offended in any way. I also love the diverse stories you post. They shed light on your intelligence time.

Phillip

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017

Hi Phillip;
thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this story, as well as the diversity in my writing style,

~patty~

reply by pbomar1115 on 18-Sep-2017

You're welcome, Patty.

Phillip