Independence
Acrostic- Loop37 total reviews
Comment from Mimi Linny
Really enjoyed reading this poem. Transition of words from line to line flow well and provides a wonderful understanding of our country's great gift of independence!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Really enjoyed reading this poem. Transition of words from line to line flow well and provides a wonderful understanding of our country's great gift of independence!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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WOW Thank you very much, for reading and understanding****kahpot
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You're most welcome! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi my friend
Really enjoyed this Acrostic loop, what a wonderful format and the words within... beautifully arranged with such heartfelt thoughts........fantastic
Mitchell
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Hi my friend
Really enjoyed this Acrostic loop, what a wonderful format and the words within... beautifully arranged with such heartfelt thoughts........fantastic
Mitchell
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you for an excellent and encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from JanPerry
I like the ideas displayed. The loop idea is not so good with each line in repetition of the last word on the line. I think just the sentence by itself without repetition is wiser.
Thanks
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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I like the ideas displayed. The loop idea is not so good with each line in repetition of the last word on the line. I think just the sentence by itself without repetition is wiser.
Thanks
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, do you mean just an ( Acrostic) poem without the ( loop ), as I was trying something different if so this is very helpful many thanks****kahpot
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the repetition seems unnecessary
Comment from sunnilicious
Acrostic poems are so simple. You wrote it very nicely. I like the repeat words for emphasis of independence and storytelling. I found this to be creative and clearly written. Patriotic too. Wonderful work. Have great week :)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Acrostic poems are so simple. You wrote it very nicely. I like the repeat words for emphasis of independence and storytelling. I found this to be creative and clearly written. Patriotic too. Wonderful work. Have great week :)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Once again thank you very much, on this one I tried and added the loop as well****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Great job on the loop poem. And the message is thought-provoking as so much is involved in preserving one's independence, the consideration of all peoples in the nation is necessary to maintain the independence of a nation.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Great job on the loop poem. And the message is thought-provoking as so much is involved in preserving one's independence, the consideration of all peoples in the nation is necessary to maintain the independence of a nation.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Kismetswriter
I love the format of this poem it was groovy and the picture was great but in some of the wording, for example, Why do we need to conform to enjoy?
Other than that it was a great job
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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I love the format of this poem it was groovy and the picture was great but in some of the wording, for example, Why do we need to conform to enjoy?
Other than that it was a great job
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from ronnie k
It can truly use change and line you change and define, I like precise defining of the line that proceeds the line above, I read liked and say how much with the stars I have.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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It can truly use change and line you change and define, I like precise defining of the line that proceeds the line above, I read liked and say how much with the stars I have.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing this ambitious acrostic-loop form. Here's to equality and independence, which seem to be in short supply these days! Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thank you for sharing this ambitious acrostic-loop form. Here's to equality and independence, which seem to be in short supply these days! Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your Loop Poem about our country, and the values we should be aspiring to. Our independence is important, along with the other intangibles our country stands for - so many have died to keep us free. It needs to be preserved.
~patty~
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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thank you for sharing your Loop Poem about our country, and the values we should be aspiring to. Our independence is important, along with the other intangibles our country stands for - so many have died to keep us free. It needs to be preserved.
~patty~
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Irish Rain
Yes, it is a loop poem, an acrostic, and the thoughts of independence also loop back around to the beginning! How clever!! I enjoyed this, blessings...
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Yes, it is a loop poem, an acrostic, and the thoughts of independence also loop back around to the beginning! How clever!! I enjoyed this, blessings...
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
