Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Waves, take that wife of yours out the a romantic dinner...and lots of flowers...LOL...I think the longer you are in a love relationship...you get to know your mate...and they know who you truly are...understanding of your good and bad sides...very well written...as always you...love your poem...and love your beautiful picture...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017

Oh she knows my good and bad side lol We have been together for over 40 years and we understand each other...we just don't always agree lol

thanks as always linda

dip

reply by l.raven on 17-Sep-2017

LOL...that is how it works...no one is always right...but when you know each other...you understand each other...soooooo welcome you...Love xxoo

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dip,

I'm curious how long you've been married, because it seems like it wasn't that long ago you were writing about looking for that someone special... Am I nuts? (Wait, don't answer that. Just answer the first question, please. *smile*) I may have you confused with someone else.

This was sweet and romantic and I can't believe a wife wouldn't appreciate i! Silly girl!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017

Hehe I have been married 34 years but have been together 40 we have totally different interests always have but we are still hanging in there

I only discovered poetry 7 years ago before that I hadn't picked up a pen in anger lol

I write every day wherever my muse takes me. The beauty of Fanstory is that we all have different styles of writes I love the diversity.
Leigh has never liked poetry and finds my poems boring and laughable lol

Oh well each to their own.Thank you so much for reviewing

dip

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Dip, This is another very beautiful heartfelt love poem you have penned. Does she not know what a love poem is? Most women would swoon over our work. It is romantic. Maybe one day she will see! Great job as always. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017

Thanks so much Teri I always appreciate your comments.

dip

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

This is fantastic!! I love the way it flows. Great rhymes and sweetly romantic. This would be a great card for Valentines day. Wish I had a six to give it!!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017

Thanks so much Sandy much appreciated as always

dip

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

Nice title. Passion breathes a loving heart. And a lovely looking presentation. I suppose I am guilty of writing love poems which is funny because my wife always tells me I haven't got a romantic bone in my body. Yep, that is amusing. BOO's favorite words:
Passion breathes a loving heart

And this I know is true

Your breath of love's here from the start

You know I'm in love with you

BOO-tatic!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017

Thanks so much Boo

dip

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written full of feeling through the poem very romantic. I have an idea you may have already tried why don't you write a romantic poem for your wife some celebration valentines, birthday, christmas or anniversary and write in the card surprise her well done I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017

Thank you so much Jill much appreciated

dip

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Can't for the life of me understand a women that doesn't like poetry. Especially as sensitive as yours but them some don't think of the simple things in life make one happy

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017

Oh well Mom each to their own I suppose
Thanks for reviewing as always

xxdip

reply by country ranch writer on 16-Sep-2017

We all have our faults

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Lovely poem and picture and great presentation in general.
So do you think your wife is right? Are you romantic in your opinion?
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017

shit no! I'm not romantic at all just ask her lol

thanks Maria much appreciated

dip

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Well hello Mr. Romantic.

I am afraid that I have to disagree with your wife, you are the King of Romance. Just ask any FanStorian. When I think of your poetry, I think of romance.

This poem is a fine example that romance exudes from your body or should I say from your pen.

The repetition works well in this poem.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017

Wow you always make me feel good about my humble writes my wonderful poetic friend Thank you so much

dip

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Your wife should appreciate your love poems - that is so romantic.

This is a wonderful love poem. I love the picture you used as well.

teresa

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017

Thank you so much Teresa much appreciated

dip