Unsafe
In the age of terrorism, is anywhere safe?6 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL! What a great way to start off my Sunday morning with your action packed 100 word flash fiction. Not having to read 300 pages to flush out the answers has stoked my appreciation for flash fiction. Thanks for sharing another fine read. :-)
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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LOL! What a great way to start off my Sunday morning with your action packed 100 word flash fiction. Not having to read 300 pages to flush out the answers has stoked my appreciation for flash fiction. Thanks for sharing another fine read. :-)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Your reviews are always welcome and this one is no exception. Thank you.
Comment from dracofelsinensis
Well, you had me fooled with the ambiguity of "I'm hit!" and "A second shot ..." Then I wondered if it was a sort of paintball military game until I read 'bunker', but even then the truth was still hidden. Thanks for the read.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Well, you had me fooled with the ambiguity of "I'm hit!" and "A second shot ..." Then I wondered if it was a sort of paintball military game until I read 'bunker', but even then the truth was still hidden. Thanks for the read.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your appreciation and stars. Good luck in your own writing.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is very good. Funny. I wonder how many people actually thought it was going to be about actual terrorism when they clicked in. lol
Nice
GMG
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Hi there,
This is very good. Funny. I wonder how many people actually thought it was going to be about actual terrorism when they clicked in. lol
Nice
GMG
Comment Written 15-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed it and thank for the fine rating. Good luck with your own writing.
Comment from mermaids
This is great. You surprised me at the end and I find your short tale very funny. The image of lady golfers is quite funny. You have a sense of humor and I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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This is great. You surprised me at the end and I find your short tale very funny. The image of lady golfers is quite funny. You have a sense of humor and I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed my effort. Thank you for the fine rating and good luck with your own writing.
Comment from Octavia
This gave me my laugh for the day. I loved the twist at the end. I was expecting a terrorist attack. lol
This was well and clearly written. (I don't think the PC police are out today on Fanstory), so don't worry.
Best of luck in the contest. This should do well.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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This gave me my laugh for the day. I loved the twist at the end. I was expecting a terrorist attack. lol
This was well and clearly written. (I don't think the PC police are out today on Fanstory), so don't worry.
Best of luck in the contest. This should do well.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your enjoyment , and associated stars. Those infected with the PC virus are everywhere ... much worse than
the plague or 1918 flu. Anyway, good luck in your own writing efforts.
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"Those infected with the PC virus are everywhere ... much worse than the plague or 1918 flu."
I agree whole heartedly!
Comment from kaymart
Haha. Golf? I was so certain they were soldiers under fire! And your use of a bunker made me think they were running for cover. You did a great job writing a good piece that ends in a bit of "hillarity" (I don't think I spelled that right.)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Haha. Golf? I was so certain they were soldiers under fire! And your use of a bunker made me think they were running for cover. You did a great job writing a good piece that ends in a bit of "hillarity" (I don't think I spelled that right.)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your appreciation and excellent rating. I've been in both types of bunkers and I prefer the sinking sand
of a golf hazard. Good luck in your own writing.
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I am sure I would prefer that to the other. I don
