Kitty
Nonet contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
I love cats too. This is what I call a tortoiseshell cat. I liked your description but you wrote a change of gender between the two nonets. At the top you rote he, at the bottom you wrote she. This is written about the same cat isn't it? Since tortoiseshell cats are almost always female I wonder .......
Good luck with contest votes
Trisha
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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I love cats too. This is what I call a tortoiseshell cat. I liked your description but you wrote a change of gender between the two nonets. At the top you rote he, at the bottom you wrote she. This is written about the same cat isn't it? Since tortoiseshell cats are almost always female I wonder .......
Good luck with contest votes
Trisha
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Dear Trisha, Actually my poem was about my two cats that I had, one male and one female. Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Duh! What I didn't see threw me off,......my apologies!
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Duh! What I didn't see threw me off,......my apologies!
Comment from Rasmine
Good poem!
I have one request, only a small one. Kameo is a girl cat, could you just change it to 'she'. Just a little request, LOL! It's okay if you don't.
She is honored, and I absolutely love this poem. It describes her to a tee except the climbing up the back and hiding mail. Are you describing your kitty?
Thank you, for picking a picture of my baby!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Good poem!
I have one request, only a small one. Kameo is a girl cat, could you just change it to 'she'. Just a little request, LOL! It's okay if you don't.
She is honored, and I absolutely love this poem. It describes her to a tee except the climbing up the back and hiding mail. Are you describing your kitty?
Thank you, for picking a picture of my baby!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Dear Rasmine, Thank you for your artwork. Your kitty is beautiful. Yes, actually I was describing two of my kitties, one was all-white and the other was different colors. The all-white one was male, and the kitty in the second stanza was female. So I'll change the pronoun to "she" in the second stanza. Thank you again for your comments and review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Mystery Poet,
Your kitty is a sweetie--love the picture. Your poem is very descriptive of all his kitty antics.
I know what you mean about God-sent--I hope the judges see it as you want & not as 2 syllables.
You are right--God knows where to send the little animals. I know mine are all God-sent. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Mystery Poet,
Your kitty is a sweetie--love the picture. Your poem is very descriptive of all his kitty antics.
I know what you mean about God-sent--I hope the judges see it as you want & not as 2 syllables.
You are right--God knows where to send the little animals. I know mine are all God-sent. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Dear Jan, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very written Animal Nonet poem you penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording about the beautiful cat. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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This is a very written Animal Nonet poem you penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording about the beautiful cat. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review and good wishes. Donna
