Autumn prelude
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Comment from RodG
Your title is very appropriate for this suite of haikus about autumn. I like how they collectively create the warm, comfortable MOOD of the season. Haiku #4 is my favorite because it combines audio and visual imagery beautifully.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Your title is very appropriate for this suite of haikus about autumn. I like how they collectively create the warm, comfortable MOOD of the season. Haiku #4 is my favorite because it combines audio and visual imagery beautifully.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thanks for reading and a great review zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a prelude to the autumn, there is beautiful harvest, crops to go on migration, evening is now lengthen for cooking pleasure is imminent with taste of the corn; I liked.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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This speaks a prelude to the autumn, there is beautiful harvest, crops to go on migration, evening is now lengthen for cooking pleasure is imminent with taste of the corn; I liked.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Jimi Seven
Very nice job....you didn't even need the photo!
Very nice job....you didn't even need the photo!
The photo was not even needed.
In fact, the moon almost looks the Earth!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Very nice job....you didn't even need the photo!
Very nice job....you didn't even need the photo!
The photo was not even needed.
In fact, the moon almost looks the Earth!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Wonderful review and thanks for those 6 twinkling stars zanya
Comment from mermaids
Excellent image of Autumn that is captured in your words. I like the verse about the swallows, birds often let us know that the seasons are changing. Excellent use of the 5-7-5 form.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Excellent image of Autumn that is captured in your words. I like the verse about the swallows, birds often let us know that the seasons are changing. Excellent use of the 5-7-5 form.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2017
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Thanks for reading and review zanya
