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An Empty Spot He Wants To Fill

Matthew 5:16

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend this is well written a beautiful spiritual piece yes my friend let other see how happy and full filled you are with god in our life regards Jill

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the review, Jill.
Comment from lyenochka
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Amen! We were all created to worship Him, so we all have that longing. It's too bad people fill that longing with worshipping the creation or themselves instead of the only One Who can make life worth living!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the wonderful review, Helen.
Comment from Heather Knight
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I like this idea of each of us having an empty spot that only the Lord can fill.
Your poem reminded me of the church song This Little Light Of Mine (I love it!).
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the wonderful review, Maria.
Comment from MelB
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Hi Patricia, This is a well written and very important piece. Now, more than ever, people need to know about Jesus and His love for them.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the wonderful review, Melissa.
Comment from jaded831
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Always a joy reading your work. I always give credit where credit is due, people ask why I am happy most of the time, I answer "because God is good". Your poem reflects this sentiment eloquently. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the lovely review, Jaded.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Never thought of it that way but your piece is true to form and quite a thought rendering piece. He does come in and make us shine.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the lovely review, Barb.
Comment from Joan E.
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I relished your presentation and artwork selection for this spiritual poem. Thank you for including the scripture that helped inspire you. Here's to making the "world...a better place". Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the lovely review, Joan.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Patricia,

Again you've written a wonderful poem.
I always look forward to reading them.
Then it's fun to write what I think about it.
Your poems are always great and I look forward to reading more of them.

Kat

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the lovely review, Kat.
reply by MizKat on 12-Sep-2017
    You are wonderful at writing your poems. I really enjoy reading them.

    Kat
Comment from Sasha
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I like how you presented this. I never thought of it this way and like this POV. Thanks for the Bible quote to go with it, it adds to the message. VEry nice work with this. I enjoyed this very much.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the lovely review, Sasha, When I talk to people about Jesus I often as if they have a feeling of being empty in a part of them.
Comment from Teri7
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Patricia, This is a very beautiful and true poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. I enjoyed reading it very much! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the lovely review, Teri.