Comment from F. Wehr3

Exceptional

Nice work, Sandra! I enjoyed this part, although I missed the last part, blame labor day. I look forward to seeing how you're going to deal with Micheal's unwanted visitor.

Looking forward to more,
Russell

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017

Thank you so much, Russell, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. And a big hug for the six shiny stars! I hope you had a great labor day. We don't have them in England, so not sure what they are. I'll go and Google it. :) Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

I'd be terrified if some guy from the past had invaded my child's mind. She handles it almost too well, don't you think? I wonder if Michael smashed the lego castle for attention because he doesn't want Joe taking over?

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Likewise! Things are about to change though. Thanks, Phyllis. :) xxx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

You posted too late I just spent my last six! Well it seems he is going to talk to you after all. It's about time! He doesn't know how he got into Michael. I'm sure Val believes him because she isn't sure about any of the stuff that happens to her. This is good Sandra. Well done dear. Nancy

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Thank you so much, my friend. Your review is worth more than a 6. The fact you like my story means everything to me. Big hugs, my friend.:) Sandra. xxxxx

Comment from Drew Delaney

Exceptional

I have enjoyed this chapter, Sandra.

t' the bottom of the garden when I were pickin' these for yer dinner." ( a t letter is dangling lol ) or not?

You can sure tell a story well. I feel in the midst somehow.

Drew xx

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017

Thank you so very much for this lovely 6 stars, Drew, and the lovely review. I've sorted the 'dangling' t' lol, I loved that expression.

Big hugs, my dear friend! :)) Sandra. xxx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

I loved this chapter - well, part chapter. You can visualise everything in your head, and the way you describe the banter between Veronica, Mildred, and both the children, is so realistic. I don't know who to feel more sorry for - Joe, or Michael. It sounds as though they are both having problems living in this symbiotic existence. I can't wait for part two!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017

Thank you so very much, my dear friend, for the lovely 6 stars! Your continued support is so very appreciated! Big hugs. :)) Sandra xxxx

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

A sudden crash made us both jump. Michael's Lego castle was smashed and all the bricks scattered around him. He stared up at us with such a tragic look on his face. "It weren't my doin' ... I don't much know 'ow I got 'ere," he said in a sad, apologetic way. Both Mildred and I looked at each other with dumbfounded expressions.' Such a facinating story, I am hooked, this could easily make a great movie and you are a fantastic writer well done amazing work love Meia :)

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017

What a lovely review, thank you so much, Meia! I'm delighted you enjoyed my story. Big hugs my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi Sandra;
I didn't find any nits - but I did find a great continuation of the story. I love that Joe can speak when he needs to. However, I fear that the more he speaks, the more of Michael he takes over.

This story is well told, and I look forward to more...and more,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017

Aww, thank you, Patty, for this wonderful review. I'll be posting the other half of this part in a few days. I'm just so pleased you are enjoying it. Big hugs, my friend, :) Sandra xx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Poor Mildred and Veronica. I don't think I'd like it if 11 month old grandson, played host to a 19 century man either, not that Michael's terribly aware that's going on anyway. (One can bet involved can't one?) excellent episode this week Sandra, with Joe, now exposing his regrettable occupation, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017

I wouldn't like it either, Roy. I love it that you 'get involved' lol, I find myself thinking like Veronica and how I'd deal with this. I think she is probably dealing with it a bit better than I would. Thank you so very much for your really lovely review, my friend. I really appreciate your thoughts. Big hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxxx

reply by royowen on 10-Sep-2017

Always your fan Sandra

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is very well written and I enjoyed as always another entertaining chapter I really look forward to reading this book well done my friend regards Jill

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017

Thank you so much, Jill, for another of your lovely reviews. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my book. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra x

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh my! Joe only shows up at certain times and they're not sure when. How horrible for Veronica! I do enjoy reading this story and can't wait for the solution.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017

Thank you so much, Barbara, for your continued support, it means such a lot to me. I'm so pleased you are enjoying it. Joe is as frustrated and Veronica. It's a vicious circle that neither Veronica of Joe knows how to get out of. Part two of this part will come soon, it was too long to put on in one go. Big hugs, my friend. I'm looking out for your next part!! :) Sandra xx