The affliction
The dreaded cell phone22 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Dr D,
I agree with your well chosen words. Good job with the rhymes, the flow, but most of all the message.
Face to face conversation? Soon it will be a faded memory like the Dewey Decimal System.
It is sad to think about. So many don't see it as them missing anything UNLESS they miss something on their phone. I hate to see phones at tables in restaurants when people should be enjoying talking to each other.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Dr D,
I agree with your well chosen words. Good job with the rhymes, the flow, but most of all the message.
Face to face conversation? Soon it will be a faded memory like the Dewey Decimal System.
It is sad to think about. So many don't see it as them missing anything UNLESS they miss something on their phone. I hate to see phones at tables in restaurants when people should be enjoying talking to each other.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much Jan I am glad you agree.
dip
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Technology has taken over our daily lives. We have to be in constant reach and contact with others. Although I never answer my phone while driving.
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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A very well-written poem. Technology has taken over our daily lives. We have to be in constant reach and contact with others. Although I never answer my phone while driving.
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Well you are a very good girl Sandra. I don't even own a mobile phone so that will never be an issue.
dip
