Perils of a mouse
Poem 2-4-23 total reviews
Comment from Curly Girly
Your verse is very descriptive:
Field mouse
frets while nibbling
acorn
Yes, they do look like that: fretful and worried. They must spend their whole lives during wakefulness just worrying about owls and cats.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Your verse is very descriptive:
Field mouse
frets while nibbling
acorn
Yes, they do look like that: fretful and worried. They must spend their whole lives during wakefulness just worrying about owls and cats.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Yes Nature has its own worries too -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very cute 2-4-2 poem, my friend. A fretting mouse nibbling his acorn, lol, quite adorable. Good luck to you. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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This is a very cute 2-4-2 poem, my friend. A fretting mouse nibbling his acorn, lol, quite adorable. Good luck to you. ~Kerry
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Thanks for reading --- even little creatures worry !!zanya
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The little critter is cute & I wish they would stay away from people.
Good job, mystery poet, on your syllable counts per line. All are correct.
Your few syllables as required + the cute picture = a fun poem.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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The little critter is cute & I wish they would stay away from people.
Good job, mystery poet, on your syllable counts per line. All are correct.
Your few syllables as required + the cute picture = a fun poem.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2017
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Thanks for critique zanya
