Editor - Part 1
A serious crush on his editor2 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Thesis. This is the kind of story that I remember you writing and loving so much. You have a way of making the imagination soar! Can't wait for the next part lol xoxo Kiwi
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Hi Thesis. This is the kind of story that I remember you writing and loving so much. You have a way of making the imagination soar! Can't wait for the next part lol xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
Comment from Sis Cat
I reviewed this already but I am glad that you are making this a two-parter or more.
"I can tell this is going to be a night to remember."
And your next chapter will answer my wish fulfillment in my first review.
I still stand by my advice to re-balance the description and dialogue ratio.
I look forward to Part 2.
Thank you for sharing.
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I reviewed this already but I am glad that you are making this a two-parter or more.
"I can tell this is going to be a night to remember."
And your next chapter will answer my wish fulfillment in my first review.
I still stand by my advice to re-balance the description and dialogue ratio.
I look forward to Part 2.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
