Comment from kittykct

Excellent

This dialogue is interesting to read. It's nicely matched to the beautiful picture. It follows the writing prompt and tells the story well. Clever solution to the problem of Moby Dick. Kitty

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017

---

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading and an encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh I like this one and the mermaid saves the day.lol
Very well written and a cute piece for all ages. Totally rocks with a perfect ending

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

---

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017

So glad you enjoyed this unusual tale of Ahab. Thanks so much for a great review. Elaine

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

BEAUTIFUL SCENERY AND GREAT PRESENTATION FOR THIS DIALOGUE, I AM GOING TO TRY MY HAND ME THINKS ON THIS ONE AND SEE IF I TOO CAND DO IT JUSTICE WE SHALL SEE

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

---

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by country ranch writer on 06-Sep-2017

smiles

reply by country ranch writer on 06-Sep-2017

Smiles

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Seeking a white whale through horrific waters is not the best thing to do. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

---

reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by c_lucas on 06-Sep-2017

You're welcome, M. Charlie