The world watches on
The worry18 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This poem is very passionate and evokes emotions in the reader. This poem represents world leaders at their worst.
The poem Is spoken in a solemn voice and rightly so.
An excellent read.....what a poem!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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This poem is very passionate and evokes emotions in the reader. This poem represents world leaders at their worst.
The poem Is spoken in a solemn voice and rightly so.
An excellent read.....what a poem!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much Mitch much appreciated
dip
Comment from Thal1959
I've got good news, and bad news. The good news is - you get five stars. The bad news is, even though this is doom and gloom, I've got to unload one on you, D... "May your platform shoes fail you in a camel pasture."
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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I've got good news, and bad news. The good news is - you get five stars. The bad news is, even though this is doom and gloom, I've got to unload one on you, D... "May your platform shoes fail you in a camel pasture."
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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A camel pasture? there would be a lot of camel toes in there that's for sure lol
Thanks Thal
dip
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure. (This cut and paste message is a recording and will repeat in 60 seconds, thank you.)
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, Dip, the world is stunned that North Korea tested a hydrogen bomb underground. Trump threatens retaliation. These are frightening times, as your poem warns:
Don't they know the consequences?
Can't they see the effect
We must charge them with these offences
For neither of them are correct
Your poem goes on to demand world peace now before it is too late. The prognosis between the two leaders looks dismal, as you conclude:
The world watches on with a slim hope
That both will come to their senses
We are sitting on a downhill slope
Hoping for better circumstances
Thank you for sharing and even more for caring.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Yes, Dip, the world is stunned that North Korea tested a hydrogen bomb underground. Trump threatens retaliation. These are frightening times, as your poem warns:
Don't they know the consequences?
Can't they see the effect
We must charge them with these offences
For neither of them are correct
Your poem goes on to demand world peace now before it is too late. The prognosis between the two leaders looks dismal, as you conclude:
The world watches on with a slim hope
That both will come to their senses
We are sitting on a downhill slope
Hoping for better circumstances
Thank you for sharing and even more for caring.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Thankyou as always Andre much appreciated
dip
Comment from damommy
I keep saying nothing's going to happen. If it does, it won't be Trump to starts it.
If it does start, we can't expect the U.S. to back down. I'm going to be sitting on the porch with my popcorn and wait for the end. 8-)
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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I keep saying nothing's going to happen. If it does, it won't be Trump to starts it.
If it does start, we can't expect the U.S. to back down. I'm going to be sitting on the porch with my popcorn and wait for the end. 8-)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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I wish it was that entertaining Yvonne... but this horror movie will not have an intermission or a happy ending :-)=<
dip
Comment from Possummagic
Yes it certainly is a worry and you've highlighted it nicely in your poem. The most powerful country in the world and arguably the most frightening country in the world. Or should I say the leaders of both. I don't think Donald will initiate WW111 but he certainly won't back down from it. Terrifying really. Great poem. PM
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Yes it certainly is a worry and you've highlighted it nicely in your poem. The most powerful country in the world and arguably the most frightening country in the world. Or should I say the leaders of both. I don't think Donald will initiate WW111 but he certainly won't back down from it. Terrifying really. Great poem. PM
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Thanks so much possum much appreciated
dip
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You're welcome. PM
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. The world situation seems to be in a state of disaster and self destruction. There is not much we can do than to trust and repent so that our souls don't end up in hell.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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A very well-written poem. The world situation seems to be in a state of disaster and self destruction. There is not much we can do than to trust and repent so that our souls don't end up in hell.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Will that save the Earth Sandra? We can pray trust and repent all we like but if one of those idiots pushes the button we are all stuffed.unfortunately. No one wins in war
dip
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We all going to die one or other time. The question is are we ready to take our souls to heaven or hell. I for one try to reach the heaven goal.
Comment from closetpoetjester
Not sure where it will end but I hope to be in the wine cellar getting blind when it does LOL
I hate the scourge of evil that threatens mankind, peace and the world today as we know it.
It's NEVER too late for diplomacy because it's pretty hard to retract a nuclear attack once it starts.
Boy are we in for some shit flying.
Hydrogen bomb? WTF?!!!
A solid write dip, in touch with the angst we all feel while certain dickheads get trigger happy trying to say who's got a bigger penis.
For chrissake. Just get them out, do the show and tell and lets kiss and make up.
For what it's worth, I reckon they are both about the same size. Small.
It's their gonads that seem to be doing all the talking LOL
Px
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Not sure where it will end but I hope to be in the wine cellar getting blind when it does LOL
I hate the scourge of evil that threatens mankind, peace and the world today as we know it.
It's NEVER too late for diplomacy because it's pretty hard to retract a nuclear attack once it starts.
Boy are we in for some shit flying.
Hydrogen bomb? WTF?!!!
A solid write dip, in touch with the angst we all feel while certain dickheads get trigger happy trying to say who's got a bigger penis.
For chrissake. Just get them out, do the show and tell and lets kiss and make up.
For what it's worth, I reckon they are both about the same size. Small.
It's their gonads that seem to be doing all the talking LOL
Px
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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hehe you are so right P stated in a way that only my P can do lol
thank you as always
dip
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Aww honey
xx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow what a wonderful ABAB and a great message but not only the two but the other ones that back them individually...it is not a win situation.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Wow what a wonderful ABAB and a great message but not only the two but the other ones that back them individually...it is not a win situation.
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Tell me about it Barb! No one wins in war. especially one of that magnitude and weaponry.
Thanks for the wonderful review
dip
