Comment from Marvin Calloway

Excellent

A well told account of the start of another day in the life of a writing wife. The early activities are done with love and never sounded trivial or monotonous.
Very nice.
Marv

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Hi Marv;
thank you so much for your time to read and review. This was kind of an 'ego piece.' I wrote from the heart and described my day - no real premise. It felt good,

~patty~

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Very well done Patty!

I really enjoyed going through your day with you. I love how thoroughly you explained it and almost like a free verse poem. It was delightfully enjoyable and made me smile. It also gave a clear view of each and everything that went on. Bravo...

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Hi Tier; thank you so much for reading this little piece about my usual day. It could sound boring, but I think it came off as pleasant, don't you?

~patty~

reply by Asem.inspirations on 09-Sep-2017

yes I do. This was an excellent piece. I really enjoyed it.

reply by Asem.inspirations on 09-Sep-2017

This day was very interesting and i really enjoyed reading the way you explained it. It was excellent, well really exceptional...

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning, Patty

Quite the busy day. I take it you are a morning person. I'm a bit surprised that after you feed you dogs, they didn't go to sleep as mine do after I feed them. Enjoyed.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Hi Ray;
thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Howie and Bernie go to sleep all the time - I don't try to keep track.

Your reviews always make me smile,

~patty~

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

Life is good, but it is a busy one as well. The descriptive writing is great. Your writing style seems to change, depending on what you write. Of late, you are revealing the versatility of your writing. I'm impressed, Patty.

Phillip

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Hi Phillip;
thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate you seeing and appreciating the versatility in my writing,

~patty~

reply by pbomar1115 on 10-Sep-2017

You're welcome, Patty

Phillip

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Just as a perfect day should be, Patty -
the sounds and smells of home as
one prepares for the day - and then
out in the fresh air to return home to
prepare dinner for the man in your life.

a simple way of life, but a joy.

congrats for the seven - I've a few pieces of work awarded a seven, but didn't realise it shows up on screen.

margaret

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Hi Margaret;
thank you so much for the lovely review of this short piece. It was a fun write.

I 'cut and paste' the gif of the seven stars onto my profile. I've received two of them, and they tickle me to no end!

~patty~

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Even if it's not a real story, as you say, I love how you have described all that the senses perceive in great detail.
And I like the last sentence: Life is good.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Hi Maria;
thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed this little slice of my life,

~patty~

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

The writer's day
Begins with everyday acts
Then the transformation begins
Fro every day housekeeper to writer
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017

Hi Charlie,
thank you so much for reading and reviewing my musings about a day in the life,

~patty~

reply by c_lucas on 03-Sep-2017

You're welcome, Patty. Charlie

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

You did indeed take us step by step into the workings of a writer from the coffee to the coffee.lol
Very well done as we walked along

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017

Hi Barb;
thank you so much for reading my little piece. I'm glad you enjoyed it,

~patty~

Comment from Natali Holden

Excellent

I love how you said, 'that other world.' Clearly this is the real world. But then again who says which is which? I saw no mistakes. Excellent work! Keep it up!
Natali ;)

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017

Hi Natali;
thank you so much for the lovely review of this 'picture of my day.'
~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written and indeed very descriptive describing what has to be done in daily life so well you did tell a story in a way reading it made me feel worn out lol I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2017

Hi Jill;
thank you so much for your lovely review of my little slice of life posting,

~patty~