Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Dennis, you have so skillfully taken revenge on the reviewer and done it in a somewhat Christlike manner. How ever I think the Lord may well have been a wee bit kinder. Patricia LOL

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

Disclaimer to all; this entry is from a culmination of reviewing experiences on FanStory. I have been on both sides of reviewing, from newbie twit myself, whose first review was a rewrite of someone else's essay, to being given a two star review from another newbie no it all (that's a pun, not a misspelling).

For the most part, FanStory is a great site, offering support and feedback I have not found on other similar sites. It can be frustrating when a writer gets an unfair review, but perhaps it is from someone giving there first review in terrible earnestness. So let's all cut each other some slack and look for what the writer is actually trying to express more than we do the errant comma or misplaced apostrophe.

So my entry is supposed to be satire, which I take to mean sarcasm with a point other than simply dissing someone. Thanks to all who read, reviewed and responded so nicely. Dennis

reply by patcelaw on 01-Sep-2017

Dennis, I was just having a bit of fun with you on this review.

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

No problem, I simply unfriended you on Facebook. (kidding)

Hope you're feeling better?

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written corrective revenge review. You did a great job telling the writer all the things she did wrong in a mannerly way. It will definitely make me thought of my way of writing.

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017

Disclaimer to all; this entry is from a culmination of reviewing experiences on FanStory. I have been on both sides of reviewing, from newbie twit myself, whose first review was a rewrite of someone else's essay, to being given a two star review from another newbie no it all (that's a pun, not a misspelling).

For the most part, FanStory is a great site, offering support and feedback I have not found on other similar sites. It can be frustrating when a writer gets an unfair review, but perhaps it is from someone giving there first review in terrible earnestness. So let's all cut each other some slack and look for what the writer is actually trying to express more than we do the errant comma or misplaced apostrophe.

So my entry is supposed to be satire, which I take to mean sarcasm with a point other than simply dissing someone. Thanks to all who read, reviewed and responded so nicely. Dennis