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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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the nightmare will never stop...I know.
But look at the lives saved and he knows it as he watches the lives go on and survive

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
    True and thanks,
    Ricky...
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Ricky.

Another deeply moving piece about poor young, Jay and his tragic passing at the hands of a mental case kid. I thought Brian died as well... sheesh! For him to live is an injustice, mate.

Well done, my friend.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
    Brain Cole was out of the hospital the next day...
    {A little blood in his urine}
    "He was seen April first 2003
    {April Fool's Day}
    Shooting baskets in front of his house while my son Jason...
    "Was being "Sliced and Diced."
    "And, separated into "Small, Refrigerated, Containers and distributed to...
    "Who The Fuck Knows Where?"
    "Why do you think my wife Carolyn took her Life only eight, months, later?"
    'Brian's Punishment?'
    "No Fines, Tickets, or Jail...
    "Just, a Loss of license for 8 months, too....
    "Thanks Fez for this..And Jason thanks You Too...
    Dr. Ricky 1024
reply by Walu Feral on 01-Sep-2017
    Wow, mate. I almost broke my keyboard just now, when I slammed my fist into the desk. I can't believe this fucked up world sometimes! Well, it's not the world, but the heartless, brainless bastards who run it.