Torchlight
5-7-5 Contest Entry28 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
Michael, this is a superb 5-7-5 on star-crossed lovers. You capture the romantic sentiment of a lover being the most cherished thing in the universe. Effect contrast between stars and eyes. Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with this fine entry.
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Michael, this is a superb 5-7-5 on star-crossed lovers. You capture the romantic sentiment of a lover being the most cherished thing in the universe. Effect contrast between stars and eyes. Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with this fine entry.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh, Mikey, you have excelled yourself here. This haiku is brilliant, no pun intended. An excellent Satori gives a human element, also romantic. Well done, Giddy
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Oh, Mikey, you have excelled yourself here. This haiku is brilliant, no pun intended. An excellent Satori gives a human element, also romantic. Well done, Giddy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
Comment from catch22
Hi Mikey, this is a lovely 5-7-5 with the correct syllable count and image to complement your words. I like the comparison of all encompassing love being greater than the enormity of the universe.
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Hi Mikey, this is a lovely 5-7-5 with the correct syllable count and image to complement your words. I like the comparison of all encompassing love being greater than the enormity of the universe.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
Comment from Irish Rain
Just wonderful, to equate your love with the wondrous stars is saying a lot...but your love surpasses them, and becomes your universe. A lovely, magical, celestial entry!! Blessings...
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Just wonderful, to equate your love with the wondrous stars is saying a lot...but your love surpasses them, and becomes your universe. A lovely, magical, celestial entry!! Blessings...
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
Comment from Teri7
Mike, This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest entry about anything. You used very good descriptive wording and I love the art work you chose. All very well done! Best wishes in the contest. teri
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Mike, This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest entry about anything. You used very good descriptive wording and I love the art work you chose. All very well done! Best wishes in the contest. teri
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
Beautiful presentation and a perfect 5/7/5. Even though it's not haiku, it has a definite haiku form which makes this all the better, Mav. An absolute delight, and expression of great admiration. I wish you all the best in the contest with this gorgeous poem.
Ange
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Beautiful presentation and a perfect 5/7/5. Even though it's not haiku, it has a definite haiku form which makes this all the better, Mav. An absolute delight, and expression of great admiration. I wish you all the best in the contest with this gorgeous poem.
Ange
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Well, 3209 responses to go. Easy to write of great admiration when something great to admire is at hand. :))
Glad you like it, Ange.
Mav
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--the ultimate love poem embedded in a striking artwork! I admired your your vivid hyperbole in this dramatic 5-7-5. This has to be a winner! Cheers- Joan
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Wow--the ultimate love poem embedded in a striking artwork! I admired your your vivid hyperbole in this dramatic 5-7-5. This has to be a winner! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, that was so romantic, Mikey, I'm sure any woman would melt if that was said to her. This is a great contest entry and the picture and presentation couldn't be bettered. Well done, my friend and good luck! :) Sandra. xx
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Aww, that was so romantic, Mikey, I'm sure any woman would melt if that was said to her. This is a great contest entry and the picture and presentation couldn't be bettered. Well done, my friend and good luck! :) Sandra. xx
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
Comment from patcelaw
Nicely done Michael with this piece of fantastic poetry. I wish you the best in the contest. Many blessing for a wonderful weekend. Keep writing and I'll keep reading, Patricia
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Nicely done Michael with this piece of fantastic poetry. I wish you the best in the contest. Many blessing for a wonderful weekend. Keep writing and I'll keep reading, Patricia
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
You are truly something when it comes to these little short works. This is like a little diamond. I would fall asleep smiling every night if anyone ever wrote words like this for me. No one will beat this. NG
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You are truly something when it comes to these little short works. This is like a little diamond. I would fall asleep smiling every night if anyone ever wrote words like this for me. No one will beat this. NG
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
