Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is an excellent haiku. The image is striking and impressive. You've focused on the brilliant colors and composed a fine piece. Each line is descriptive with good word choices. Last line sums it up. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Lovely Haiku Maria, and the fight off between the colours streaking the sky. Great finish off line - black wins in the end - lovely presentation.
cheers.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017

Thanks, Valda.

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Fine, colorful Haiku about colors of sunset fighting it out. "Black wins in the end" is an effective satori for this battle. Center line serves the first line and stands alone.

Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks, Andre.

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your haiku "Nightfull" You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose a perfect photo. I believe 5-7-5 to be the only haiku.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks for reading.

reply by marybell1 on 03-Sep-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Simple words that paint a lovely picture of a sunset where colors compete and in the end - all is black. Beautiful artwork. Should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks for reading.

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

I loved your nature Haiku . Beautiful picture too God's colors are amazing. But how many of us really are conscious of the wonder each day? We tend to take sunsets for granted
Good luck in the contest
Hugs Trisha

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

You're right, Trisha. My husband often comments on the beauty of the sunset and sometimes I don't even lift my eyes from my iPad to look.

reply by Bucketlist on 02-Sep-2017

Many of us are guilty (iPad uses especially LOL)

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Hey there MARIA:

I am still reading so many posts, trying to knock down my messages count now at 50 messages. I see that you have posted many times so I will try to read them all.

This posts is gorgeous. The colors in that sky of sunset are so well described in your poem. It left me really appreciating the photo and the words about it. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks so much, Tier.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

What magnificient imagery with the colors fighting the darker as the sun sets farther into the horizion, then the satori as black wins. Very well done

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks, Barb.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very unique way to describe the sunset and the following fall of nighttime darkness. I wish you the best of luck in the contest with this entry. Blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks, Patricia.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There is no need for a picture to accompany your poem because you paint a perfect picture here with a few words, after the sunset comes the night, perfectly worded, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks, Dolly.