"The Gift of Life II"
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Clean White Paper"Poems and interesting facts on this much needed su
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned about the donating of a kidney to this eight year old child. What a great blessing that was. Very good wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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This is a very well written poem you have penned about the donating of a kidney to this eight year old child. What a great blessing that was. Very good wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thanks Teri for your review and support.
Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment from gene roush
This took a few lines for me to grasp, but it all came together in the end.
The unusual style can be a turn off, but the questioning of questions is accurate of shock victims. And what greater shock can there be than death?
This is interesting.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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This took a few lines for me to grasp, but it all came together in the end.
The unusual style can be a turn off, but the questioning of questions is accurate of shock victims. And what greater shock can there be than death?
This is interesting.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review and thoughts.
Dr. Ricky 1024.
