Storming Rain
An angry mother nature6 total reviews
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very well done Tyburn poem delivers a clear and understandable message, and can be taken both literally and figuratively. Great job on a not-that-easy form, you made it sound natural.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Very well done Tyburn poem delivers a clear and understandable message, and can be taken both literally and figuratively. Great job on a not-that-easy form, you made it sound natural.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Thanks for the read and your kind words.
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You're welcome
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
You did a great job with one. All syllables present and correct and a very topical issue commented on at present.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Hi there,
You did a great job with one. All syllables present and correct and a very topical issue commented on at present.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your read.
Comment from lyenochka
Great poem that describes the disaster that Texas is dealing with now. This format is a bit tricky in that it requires you to use the four descriptive words in a very specific place in the two 9 syllable lines. They need to fall between syllables 5-8, the four syllables before the last. This poem have those words fall in the wrong positions in the longer two lines. Otherwise, a very timely poem.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Great poem that describes the disaster that Texas is dealing with now. This format is a bit tricky in that it requires you to use the four descriptive words in a very specific place in the two 9 syllable lines. They need to fall between syllables 5-8, the four syllables before the last. This poem have those words fall in the wrong positions in the longer two lines. Otherwise, a very timely poem.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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I will check and try to correct. Thanks.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Poet. This is written in perfect format and is so apropos for what is happening in Texas just now. I think we better get a grip on what is physically happening and not just spiritually. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Hello Poet. This is written in perfect format and is so apropos for what is happening in Texas just now. I think we better get a grip on what is physically happening and not just spiritually. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the read. I am with you, Kiwigirl. Climate change is a reality.
Comment from nbonner
I liked this tyburn poem, it flowed really well. Floods are disasters that can cause serious damage. Thank you for sharing and best wishes on the contest
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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I liked this tyburn poem, it flowed really well. Floods are disasters that can cause serious damage. Thank you for sharing and best wishes on the contest
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the read and your comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Such an unfortunate situation shown in image.
-You followed the prompt well.
-I like your choice of descriptive words.
-You used them very well in the last two lines.
-Effective imagery and rhyme to describe the situation.
-A good entry that shows you care about this hurricane
and the people trying to get through it.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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-Such an unfortunate situation shown in image.
-You followed the prompt well.
-I like your choice of descriptive words.
-You used them very well in the last two lines.
-Effective imagery and rhyme to describe the situation.
-A good entry that shows you care about this hurricane
and the people trying to get through it.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your read and your comments.
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You are welcome.
