Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

It's amazing how much can be said with so few words, Ulla -
Such an emotional write with the right decision in the end.

well penned, my friend - and good luck with the contest.

Margaret

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Margaret. I'm so pleased how this wee poem has been received. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

An exceptional poem considering the few words too complete, the image of accompaniment, as the pain of jilted love is palpable. Good luck on the contest, Ulla!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Hello Mary, thank you so much!!! All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I liked this very much. You packed so much emotion in so few words, it packed a punch! Great image you paired with it. It seems like a very strong entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you so much. !!!! How pleased I am. Allthe best. Ulla:)))

reply by Boogienights on 31-Aug-2017

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hola Ulla :)

You managed to put a lot of emotion into this tiny lanturne poem. The presentation is stunning and it adds to the feeling of anger and sadness. Well done! Good luck in the contest, my friend.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Awwww, thank you so much!!! Un besito. Ulla:)))

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I like this Ulla. It is very deep for such few words. Perfect lanturne form. I wish you the best in the contest.

~~Teresa~~

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Teresa. I'm so pleased. Ulla:)xx

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is a very spirited poem. It's full of feeling.
I like the title and subtitle you've chosen and the picture is very appropriate.
My favorite line is the last. Just one word, but so full of fury.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Maria Jose. So glad you like it. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from LaRosa

Exceptional

Perfect!
Simple, straight forward, honest. The command that shows the writer has taken over her life in spite of betrayal and pain. It fits any one's like experience...not gender specific.
Very nice looking 'lantern' on top of it.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017

Wow, Rosa, thank you so much for this glowing review. You've made my day. Thank you, thank you. All the best. Ulla:)xx

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Exceptional

Oh, my sentiments exactly, LOL. Let the cad go if he's been unfaithful This is a great little poem , Ulla. You are becoming an expert at these lanturnes. The very best for the competition, Giddy

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017

Awwwww, Giddy, my dear friend. Thank you so much. I'm overjoyed. Yeah, that's what I thought. Let him go. Thanks again. Big hugs, Ulla xxx

Comment from nbonner

Excellent

Nicely written Lanturne poem. This speaks someone who's heart has been broken and has had enough. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you so very much!!! All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written the syllable count and presentation are good you bring out the feeling of the person well good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Oh, Jill, Thankk you so much!!! All the best. Ulla:)))