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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Oh your addition of more information about your players of your pieces makes the whole piece or pieces so real and so true. lNnicely done

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    The "Puzzle pieces" of that...
    "Horrid Event."
    "Are yet to be all completely seen...
    Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Ricky

"I made a new friend today n(a)med Brian!"

"We had a picture taken in schoo(l) today!"

Yes, mate, it is intriguing isn't it? Was he there alone?

Looking forward to finding out more.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    Cleaned up Part Number One.
    Thanks Fez,
    Ricky...
reply by Walu Feral on 27-Aug-2017
    Always welcome, mate.
Comment from Octavia
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I don't mean to mess up your rating score - (so I'll give you a fiver for scribbles and a pic) did you release this too soon?

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
    "JUST NOW!"

    Ricky 1024.