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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Section 5 - Part 3: Exhumed"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from BOO ghost
yeah, I seen this face before. cast of characters BOO likes. Am forgetful. Reads smoothly. BOO's favorite paragraph. I usually pick one. It was Spencer Aloysius, the town's resident bully. He enjoyed picking on smaller boys. He was also a year older, and a head taller, than Cody. Jeremy and Jerome Stubblefield positioned themselves beside him. The cinnamon-haired freckle-faces, who lived past the railroad tracks on the outskirts of town, laughed at Spencer's comment and eagerly egged him on.
Entertaining read. BOO enjoyed and have a nice day! B00-tastic!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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yeah, I seen this face before. cast of characters BOO likes. Am forgetful. Reads smoothly. BOO's favorite paragraph. I usually pick one. It was Spencer Aloysius, the town's resident bully. He enjoyed picking on smaller boys. He was also a year older, and a head taller, than Cody. Jeremy and Jerome Stubblefield positioned themselves beside him. The cinnamon-haired freckle-faces, who lived past the railroad tracks on the outskirts of town, laughed at Spencer's comment and eagerly egged him on.
Entertaining read. BOO enjoyed and have a nice day! B00-tastic!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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Have a fantastic day!
Comment from royowen
I must admit, even if it is fiction, it's good to hear and read a bully "get his", and the mysterious rock that just missed Cody, is a sign that Cody's character is ready to take on Earl Anthony Scroder. How did the bully know Cody is bulletin poster Cody's dad? Well done. Brett, a most satisfying episode, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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I must admit, even if it is fiction, it's good to hear and read a bully "get his", and the mysterious rock that just missed Cody, is a sign that Cody's character is ready to take on Earl Anthony Scroder. How did the bully know Cody is bulletin poster Cody's dad? Well done. Brett, a most satisfying episode, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
How did Spencer know Cody was posting Wanted posters of Earl Anthony Schroder, it is assumed he saw others Cody had posted around town.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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Well done Brett
Comment from Sankey
Great chapter. Just one comment I realize the single expression marks around Cody's thinking is probably right but technically as Thal has taught me most of these should have double expression marks around them unless the comment or thought is contained within other double expression marks. As I said above if they are just thoughts the single expression marks might be considered ok.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Great chapter. Just one comment I realize the single expression marks around Cody's thinking is probably right but technically as Thal has taught me most of these should have double expression marks around them unless the comment or thought is contained within other double expression marks. As I said above if they are just thoughts the single expression marks might be considered ok.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Spitfire
What a feisty character this freckled-face boy is. The references to his past make me wish I had followed, but my time is limited because I'm editing (and adding to) a true story I wrote about four years ago.
Your writing is excellent. This post makes me wonder why he remembers Melanie?
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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What a feisty character this freckled-face boy is. The references to his past make me wish I had followed, but my time is limited because I'm editing (and adding to) a true story I wrote about four years ago.
Your writing is excellent. This post makes me wonder why he remembers Melanie?
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
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Comment from apky
Right, just the kind of pep talk I need for myself at certain moments:
He felt his insanity slither downward. Apathetic to the perception, he buoyed himself to 'Hold it together, Cody. You are not the worthless trash Earl Anthony Schroder has always tried to cram down your throat that you are. Your views on the world may not always be right, and more than once you have had to learn how to fit in with other people, but you are audacious, adventurious, and you have a keen level of intelligence. These are the things that will empower you to conquer this nightmare once and for all.'
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Right, just the kind of pep talk I need for myself at certain moments:
He felt his insanity slither downward. Apathetic to the perception, he buoyed himself to 'Hold it together, Cody. You are not the worthless trash Earl Anthony Schroder has always tried to cram down your throat that you are. Your views on the world may not always be right, and more than once you have had to learn how to fit in with other people, but you are audacious, adventurious, and you have a keen level of intelligence. These are the things that will empower you to conquer this nightmare once and for all.'
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
