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For the love of God

Triple Tanka

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Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Carolyn. You've used a good format in your triple Tankas. I love how you believe what you are saying and following faithfully to make your world better. It's an awesome thing to see. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    Hi kiwigirl, thank you for stopping by to read and review 'For the love of God.' I appreciate your kind and thoughtful words. :-) Carolyn
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your triple tanka. You had all your lines and syllables and you included a special message.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    Thank you marybell1, I appreciate that you took the time to validate the Tanka. That means a lot to me. And I am especially glad, also, that you liked the content. :-) Carolyn
reply by marybell1 on 31-Aug-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written tanka suite. When we have God in our lives. Everything seems to make more sense. It doesn't mean we don't have problems but He helps us over come them.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    Thank you Sandra for your fine comments. I appreciate your validation of it as a well written Tanka suite.. You are as usual, so kind in your review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Curly Girly
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Hi, Carolyn.
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem about God's love for ordinary working people on a daily basis.
This part popped out to me:
Time waits for no one
However, He is patient
Calling us home one by one
Nicole

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
    Hi Nicole,
    thank you for stopping by and for your kind and thoughtful comments.
    I'm glad you liked the Tanka.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from beizanten
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A very good first stanza, A great and deep second paragraph, the mood flow well throughout. Great fic, it remind me the important of fait. Overall you had done a great job, keep it up!

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments.... :-) Carolyn
Comment from patcelaw
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Carolyn, this is wonderfully worded and beautifully presented . Yes, our Good is to be trusted in everything and He never lies to us, but gives us the best like the good father He is. Patricia

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
    Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind comments. :-) Carolyn