For the love of God
Triple Tanka16 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi
This such is a wonderful read, capturing your love for God brilliantly, very sublime, almost charmed in its presentation.
Nice echoing of sounds throughout, It's kind of surreal almost, very dreamlike and impressionistic, yet still connected to reality.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Hi
This such is a wonderful read, capturing your love for God brilliantly, very sublime, almost charmed in its presentation.
Nice echoing of sounds throughout, It's kind of surreal almost, very dreamlike and impressionistic, yet still connected to reality.
Mitchell
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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thank you Mitchell. Your review is very encouraging. :-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
HI Carolyn, I am more ready now than I have ever been...I get closer to God everyday...and He stands right by me...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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HI Carolyn, I am more ready now than I have ever been...I get closer to God everyday...and He stands right by me...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Hi dear Linda, it is so good to see you. I thank you for the sweet review and generous rating. Love you too.. :-) Carolyn
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always welcome Carolyn...smiling big back at ya...love xxoo
Comment from MizKat
Hi notesandmore,
What you have written was wonderful to read. I liked the picture that you
used with it too. It, as always, was very nice to read. Thanks!
Kat
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Hi notesandmore,
What you have written was wonderful to read. I liked the picture that you
used with it too. It, as always, was very nice to read. Thanks!
Kat
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Thanks dear Kat, I always enjoy hearing from you. I am really trying to get back to FS more. I love it, just have very full days. I am grateful to God for that as well. Take care, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Hi Carolyn,
It's always nice to hear from you. I'm happy that you enjoy hearing from
me too.
Kat
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend this is well written God does call us one by one to our heavenly home and we do have to be prepared because we don't know when this time will be well done I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Oh yes my friend this is well written God does call us one by one to our heavenly home and we do have to be prepared because we don't know when this time will be well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Hi Jill, so good to hear from you and to receive this wonderful review. thank you so much, :-) Carolyn
Comment from BOO ghost
Wow, a triple tanka. . We live in such an unstable world. isn't it wonderful that we have a Heavenly Father that we can depend on? Yep, we are mortals and we will die in this material world but the best life is coming if we choose to believe in Him. We must be tested. Wonderful picture. BOO's favorite quatrain: Are you ready now
To obey His blessed will
Time waits for no one
However, He is patient
Calling us home one by one
BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Wow, a triple tanka. . We live in such an unstable world. isn't it wonderful that we have a Heavenly Father that we can depend on? Yep, we are mortals and we will die in this material world but the best life is coming if we choose to believe in Him. We must be tested. Wonderful picture. BOO's favorite quatrain: Are you ready now
To obey His blessed will
Time waits for no one
However, He is patient
Calling us home one by one
BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Hi Boo, I love your pen-name.. thank you for this wonderful review and generous rating. I'm glad you enjoyed reading 'For the love of God'. :-) Carolyn
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Anytime. Have a good day. BOO!
Comment from Irish Rain
Wonderful. Yes, time waits for no one, but God hopes we find our way in time. I think God is more patient than we know, these are lovely. Blessings....
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Wonderful. Yes, time waits for no one, but God hopes we find our way in time. I think God is more patient than we know, these are lovely. Blessings....
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you my friend.. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
Since I have not posted, nor studied the contents of a Tanka, I assume you have done it correctly. Of course, the subject matter is right on target. Our Lord is indeed always there with his faithful love and honest Word. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Since I have not posted, nor studied the contents of a Tanka, I assume you have done it correctly. Of course, the subject matter is right on target. Our Lord is indeed always there with his faithful love and honest Word. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you Miss Sally, I enjoy Tanka and other forms. This one flowed easily. Probably because its my favorite subject. :-) Carolyn
Comment from royowen
You're absolutely right dear Carolyn, I don't what I'd do without Him in my life, and without His guiding word, I wouldn't know or understand very much. Well done dear friend, an excellent way to use tanka, in the broadened form of a suite. Excellent entry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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You're absolutely right dear Carolyn, I don't what I'd do without Him in my life, and without His guiding word, I wouldn't know or understand very much. Well done dear friend, an excellent way to use tanka, in the broadened form of a suite. Excellent entry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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I appreciate your fine comments Roy. Thank you for all you have said. I would be so lonely without my Lord.
Love, Carolyn
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Me too Carolyn
Comment from Heather Knight
You have built a very interesting tanka. Making it triple allows for more space to express your ideas.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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You have built a very interesting tanka. Making it triple allows for more space to express your ideas.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Maria, thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments, as well as the generous rating. Top in anytime. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks our love to God and how we do and show God our love and reliance and confidence upon Him for all and most important things in life, He waits to receive us all to heaven one by one; I liked.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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This speaks our love to God and how we do and show God our love and reliance and confidence upon Him for all and most important things in life, He waits to receive us all to heaven one by one; I liked.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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I am glad you liked the poem and so very appreciative that you took time to review it. Thank you so much for your kind words. :-) Carolyn
