Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I liked your intriguing title and parallel photograph selection. Your clever 5-7-5 is made even more appealing by your alliteration of "s's". I'd enjoy your "haiku sandwich" any time! Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks, Joan.

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem "Two ends and a middle". I liked the humour and you had all your lines and syllables correct for this genre.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you.

reply by marybell1 on 31-Aug-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

very good entry
love the humor
the pic certainly goes well with your poem
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

It took me a few reads to figure out this 5-7-5. Then I realized you were talking about the poem itself. Unique topic and amusing photo to accompany. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thank you.

Comment from emptypage

Excellent

Liked this a lot. It got a grin out of me. I'm not a poet, I just play one on tv, but I love haiku. I don't get all the rules, but I enjoy them anyway. Your syllable count is perfect, of course. That with the grin looks like a vote to me!

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks for the kind review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend,

seven syllables 5
between two slices of five 7
yum...haiku sandwich 5............good syllable count :)

Excellent 5/7/5 and the picture is perfect for the poem. Good job.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks for the great review. And congrats to you on the win.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 poem with a little truth that gives it a fun element of mystery and say a lot in three lines with limited syllables. When the poet gets the message across it serves as a little jewel.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from nbonner

Excellent

Humorous, I liked. The short 5-7-5 poem made me smile and I love the picture you chose. Great job. Thank you for sharing and best wishes on the contest

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks for the kind review.

Comment from Joe Krenn

Excellent

Quite a literal haiku! This honestly gave me a good laugh, which I especially really needed today! Thank you and good luck in your contest! Funny picture too!

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks, glad it brought it smile.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

An unusual 5-7-5 poem, but a good description of the form
Not sure how good it would taste as a sandwich
but it reads nicely as a poem
Perfect picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017

Thanks for the kind review.