Lost and Found
The poor guy must be going crazy!6 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Congratulations on taking home the winning ribbon. Great accompanying photograph. It adds your work nicely. That's a cute little poem to commemorate a late great. Well thought out and clearly written. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Congratulations on taking home the winning ribbon. Great accompanying photograph. It adds your work nicely. That's a cute little poem to commemorate a late great. Well thought out and clearly written. Nice work :)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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What a pleasant surprise! Thank you so much for your compliments and most generous sixer, Sunnilicious.
Don
Comment from smileycloud
L.O.L.
very good 5 7 5
great humor
good luck in the contest
just love the pic too
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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L.O.L.
very good 5 7 5
great humor
good luck in the contest
just love the pic too
have a smiley day
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Smiley, for your laugh and good wishes (probably responsible for my win)!
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a cute and humorous 5-7-5 written in Dean's honor. It does look like his hat. Didn't know he misplaced it. I like that you have rhymed all three lines. Illustrated well. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
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This is a cute and humorous 5-7-5 written in Dean's honor. It does look like his hat. Didn't know he misplaced it. I like that you have rhymed all three lines. Illustrated well. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha...I was beginning to wonder what the heck had happened to Mr. Monopoly (the name of the cat in question). I'm sure glad you found him.
Now, if you can just give me your location I'll come out right away to take MM off your hands.
Funny poem, p-u-r-r-r-r-r-r-f-e-c-t syllable count too.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Hahaha...I was beginning to wonder what the heck had happened to Mr. Monopoly (the name of the cat in question). I'm sure glad you found him.
Now, if you can just give me your location I'll come out right away to take MM off your hands.
Funny poem, p-u-r-r-r-r-r-r-f-e-c-t syllable count too.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Dean, I think this may be a case of mistaken identity. I thought of you the instant I saw what I thought was a one-of-a-kind cat. Are you absolutely sure your Mr. Monopoly is missing? Is he also known as LIllian? This cat is, according to her collar. Sorry for the mixup, if it is one..
Thanks for your good contest wishes.
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No, he came back last night--false alarm.
But, yes, I'm quite sure he was missing.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your humour poem "Lost and Found". You followed all the rules for this genre, and I too seem to recognise that hat.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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I enjoyed reading your humour poem "Lost and Found". You followed all the rules for this genre, and I too seem to recognise that hat.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much, Marybell, for your most appreciated comments!
Don
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed the humor in your 5-7-5 and of course
the picture adds clarity.
Good use of mono-rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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I enjoyed the humor in your 5-7-5 and of course
the picture adds clarity.
Good use of mono-rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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I'm pleased to meet you, Nancy! Thanks so much for your compliments.
Don (aka Ogden)
