This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "A Rollercoaster of Emotions"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Joy Graham
Hi Sandra,
This is all very thought provoking. I'm curious how Joe could just wander through time and into Michael's body. Also, it's fascinating that Veronica is able to work through the mystery in her own time. It sure changes things in the time hop. I like it. I'd like to try this time travelling. It could be fun.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hi Sandra,
This is all very thought provoking. I'm curious how Joe could just wander through time and into Michael's body. Also, it's fascinating that Veronica is able to work through the mystery in her own time. It sure changes things in the time hop. I like it. I'd like to try this time travelling. It could be fun.
Joy xx
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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I'd love to try it, too! It really would be fun. Thank you, Joy, for another lovely review. I'm enjoying reading your responses to how you think the story line is developing. Big hugs, dear friend. :) xxx
Comment from Mary Wakeford
An excellent chapter here, Sandra. I've missed many, but felt I had a good sense of the continuation with your descriptive characters, dialogue and helpful reference.
You most definitely have a bestseller on your hands. You attention to the tiniest detail is exemplary.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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An excellent chapter here, Sandra. I've missed many, but felt I had a good sense of the continuation with your descriptive characters, dialogue and helpful reference.
You most definitely have a bestseller on your hands. You attention to the tiniest detail is exemplary.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for jumping in again, Mary, that was so nice of you. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, Veronica has loads to do! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Janilou
Such a fascinating novel. I know I read and reviewed an earlier chapter. I think I will bookcase it, so I can go back and read from the beginning and make more sense of what is going on. :-)
I didn't see any errors. All the best with your novel!
Jan
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Such a fascinating novel. I know I read and reviewed an earlier chapter. I think I will bookcase it, so I can go back and read from the beginning and make more sense of what is going on. :-)
I didn't see any errors. All the best with your novel!
Jan
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Hi Jan, thank you for coming back, I really appreciate that! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. If you find it hard to understand who is who in this book, I have a very short synopsis of the first book in the series that I can send you in a PM. Thanks again, and big hugs, :) Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
The plot thickens! I can't imagine what the family are going through, believing little Michael was been taken over by a spirit from the past. I really hope Veronica can work it out - with James and Mildred's help, of course!
I can't wait to read on.
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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The plot thickens! I can't imagine what the family are going through, believing little Michael was been taken over by a spirit from the past. I really hope Veronica can work it out - with James and Mildred's help, of course!
I can't wait to read on.
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Aww, thank you, my dear friend, for this lovely review! That is so nice of you and for giving me another 6! I really appreciate you. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from wordsfromsue
I wondered early on if Joe would end up being Fry.
Hmm, how are you going to straighten out this dilemma.
Does 'Michael' come 'Joe' work as 'Michael'/'Joe' or would that be entirely incorrect?
Alright, I'm waiting for the next installment!
Good writing Sandra. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I wondered early on if Joe would end up being Fry.
Hmm, how are you going to straighten out this dilemma.
Does 'Michael' come 'Joe' work as 'Michael'/'Joe' or would that be entirely incorrect?
Alright, I'm waiting for the next installment!
Good writing Sandra. :-)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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No, Joe won't turn into Fry. Try again! LOL. I don't know about the Joe, Michael thing, I might end up taking it out and rephrasing it. It doesn't sit right with me now. Even though you people accept things like: Bedroom cum study. But, it's been planted in my head now, so I'll have to change it. This is the good part of FS, if I get comments like that from the people on here, there will be more out there who (hopefully) read it thinking the same things. Thanks for reading and the lovely review. Big hugs my friend. :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Liked the way you formatted this well written story.
FanStory's set up for book chapters is so limiting. Was searching for a method of displaying my newest book on this site, which contains several parts for each chapter, and believe I may have found one I like. So, for that. many thanks.
Interesting concept in this storyline. Definitely one to follow.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Liked the way you formatted this well written story.
FanStory's set up for book chapters is so limiting. Was searching for a method of displaying my newest book on this site, which contains several parts for each chapter, and believe I may have found one I like. So, for that. many thanks.
Interesting concept in this storyline. Definitely one to follow.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett. Thank you for complimenting my format, I find this the easiest and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you also for reading my story, I've given myself many problems to sort out, but it's fun. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from l.raven
HI Sandra, maybe if you would have nursed Michael through breakfast Joe would have come out...then again maybe not...LOL...just a thought...kidding...lets move on...hope I didn't offend you...just working on an idea...ok!!! lets try the chocolate idea...something has to work...a great chapter sweet girl...and a great picture...very well written...ya know I love ya...Linda xxoo
Hi to Ian for me...xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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HI Sandra, maybe if you would have nursed Michael through breakfast Joe would have come out...then again maybe not...LOL...just a thought...kidding...lets move on...hope I didn't offend you...just working on an idea...ok!!! lets try the chocolate idea...something has to work...a great chapter sweet girl...and a great picture...very well written...ya know I love ya...Linda xxoo
Hi to Ian for me...xxoo
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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LOL. LOL, LOL. LOL!!!!!!! Linda, I nearly choked on my cornflakes!!!!! I don't think he would have left, at least, not until I stopped feeding Michael! LOL! You crack me up! Of course, you didn't offend me, you've started my day with a humungous laugh! What picture are you referring to? The one I've put on, or the one you've planted in my head?????? LOL! Okay, I have to be serious now, thank you so very, very much for the lovely 6 stars, my wonderful friend, and for your hilarious review. I loved it and you. Biggest hugs. :)) Sandra xxxxxxxx
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well!!! just hold that thought...we my need it to get Joe out...LOL...hope you enjoyed your cornflakes...LOL...ya know I loved this chapter...and you are always sooooo welcome sweet girl...and the biggerest hugs back to ya...smiling big...love you too...xxoo ...say hi to Ian for me...xxoo
Comment from country ranch writer
Well maybe things will work its way out to everyone's advantage and he can go back in time to where he is supposed to be and leave little Michel alone.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Well maybe things will work its way out to everyone's advantage and he can go back in time to where he is supposed to be and leave little Michel alone.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Michael, for reading this part of my story. Yes, he has to leave Michael, and hopefully, Veronica will find a way soon. :) Samdra xx
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Comment from JDRBAR
I took all the hair clips out(of) the sides of her hair
I walked into the kitchen, and sat (sitting there) watching her was a flour covered little boy, eagerly wai
The story continues to be most interesting.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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I took all the hair clips out(of) the sides of her hair
I walked into the kitchen, and sat (sitting there) watching her was a flour covered little boy, eagerly wai
The story continues to be most interesting.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend, and for the suggestions, I really appreciate them. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from rwilliam
This was such a fun read. I love your idea of teaching him how to make chocolate. Such a fun concept.
I liked that you are making it 'difficult' so that there's a problem to overcome. I'm very curious to see what will be the outcome.
Great writing. :-)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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This was such a fun read. I love your idea of teaching him how to make chocolate. Such a fun concept.
I liked that you are making it 'difficult' so that there's a problem to overcome. I'm very curious to see what will be the outcome.
Great writing. :-)
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars, my friend, and the lovely review. I'm going to try and make the chocolate and see what it comes out like, LOL, I don't think it will be as good as the chocolate I could go and buy, but it will be fun. Thanks again, my friend, :) Sandra xxx
