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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Howie and Bernie's Adventure"
...stories and poems about the boys

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Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for sharing the eclipse trip from the perspective of Howie and Bernie. How cute that Barney actually gave a peace offering. I guess the dogs were smart enough not to look at the sun so no glasses needed for them, right?

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Hi there;
    I read, and was told by my Vet, animals have an instinctual knowledge to NOT look directly into the sun - ever. I'm so glad they were there to share the moment - of course, knowing my hubby and dearest friends were there, too, made it an important moment,

    ~patty~
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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This was a fun story. I like stories from the animals point of view. We are always trying to translate what our pets are saying to us, It helps pass the time doesn't it? Some animals are so smart and learn words quickly but others? Not so much. Good job on the story about the eclipse! It was amazing even though I had to see it on TV. LOL Nancy

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Hi Nancy;
    thank you so much for your kind words about my 'animal interpretations.' I love to study my dogs and try to think about things from their point of view - it may be a waste of time, but I have a great deal of fun with it,

    ~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written adventurous story. It seems the animals enjoyed the trip as much as the humans did. Howie and Bernie also meet a new friend Barney and they have lots of doggie fun. Lol.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Hi Sandra;
    thank you so much for reading and reviewing Howie and Bernie's latest offering. The dogs seem to have more fun than I do!

    ~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
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Dogs and eclipses
Leads to an unusual day
This is a one in a million
Viewing time.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Hi Charlie;
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this latest story about Howie and Bernie,

    ~patty~
reply by c_lucas on 23-Aug-2017
    You're welcome, Patti. Charlie
Comment from royowen
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There's nothing like an event such as an eclipse and the enablement of existing in a different spot an experiencing it, with one's pets, and looking and speaking from their perspective is cute, and quite definitely a lovely reading experience. Your clever scribing perspective is appreciated, Patty, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Hi Roy;
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments,

    ~patty~
reply by royowen on 23-Aug-2017
    Most welcome
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Sounds like Howie doesn't like new things.

Nice of Barney to offer a chew bone:)

But he ended up being better friends with Barney than Bernie did.

Ah, the eclipse. Yea. I'm glad you wrote about it.

I was 'ahed' by the eclipse and loved your story:)

teresa

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 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Hi Teresa;
    thank you so much for reading the latest Howie and Bernie tale. They were a big part of the weekend adventure, and I was happy to relive it through their eyes,

    ~patty~
Comment from apky
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I always marvel at you wonderful way of bringing out the characters and personalities of Howie and Bernie so well, they are really three-dimensional.

By this point I was near hysterical with laughter:>>Barney thought it was funny that Howie and Bernie usually did their business in the house on a pee pad. He was used to checking out the landscape and marking his territory. He felt it was his duty to teach Howie to do the same. He even managed to coax Howie to lift his leg to a tree or two.<<

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 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thank you Aki. You would have howled if you could have seen the expression on Bernie's face as he watched Howie lift his leg. It was priceless!

    I'm glad you enjoyed this story,

    ~patty~